fate
glued you to me
with no plasters
but with an avalanche
of sticky sand
all over our feet
.
fate
glued you to me
with no binders
but with an avalanche
of sticky wind
all over our skin
.
and we hugged
the fate of a lifetime
my sweet ocean
without footing back
to that stickiness
we actually dread..
.
.
.
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awesome sticky poem,
nice application of nature to focus,
well done!
haha tq ji..
aww..that sticky’s mighty sweet
and is it? thanks rene!
LOVEly!
tq giovanni
lovely poem! I like the repetition.
thanks deadpoet..
I love “my sweet ocean”….such immense and awesome love expressed… unbound joy and infinite love:) heartspell
tq heartspell..
Enjoyable read.
thanks dasuntoucha..
This one will stick in my mind…lovely love poem 🙂
thank you tracy..
wow, this is wonderful, fiveloaf 🙂
the first stanza caught me unaweres
xx
thanks glit..
This is a very cool, slick, and different style. Great job fiveloaf !
thanks 2zpoint!
Wonderful…could you be referring to a lover or to the beach?…the thought of this brings out a unique beauty…I love how the amalgamation isn’t done by items that are known for that…nicely done, bro.
TGIF, have a splendid week,
Cheers!
thanks emmanuel.. 🙂
This is cute…I can imagine the beauty of hugging with sand around.
urghh! that was then and as at now, it is yuks! yuks! haha!