you inspired me
to walk the path with you
you exuded
a zest quite unlike others
you are cute
ever more so vulnerable
when gushed
with overwhelming pride
as you rubbed
your conservativeness
all over me
I love unconventionality
you inspired me
and thought me worthy
.
let us walked on..
.
.
.
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Definitely a good influence you are unconventional for two!:-)
haha thanks 2z.
Lovely poem. You’re one of my favorite poets – you have a unique style. 🙂
tq white buffalo..
Lovely, endearing poem.
Beautiful to have found your muse that inspires and loves you as well.
Cheers,
Joanny.
🙂 thanks joanny..
I like the imagery here. I can see you two walking hand in hand just talking away in you own world. Really lovely piece 🙂
oh yea-!
I love coming here and see such a beautiful love bloom…congrats to you both 🙂 Big hugs xx
tq buttercup..
The voice in this poem was so tender and cute…nicely written.
Cheers.
thanks bro..
such sweet words of love… you are worthy, for sure. 🙂 heartspell
eh? haha thanks!
full of passion and grace,
divine piece..
xx
thks ji..
Kris,
A very nice poem with very warm words.
Sounds like you may be happy and contented!
Best wishes, Eileen 🙂
tq eileen
Lovely poem, very heartfelt. I really loved the ending especially!
thank you deadpoet88..
Loved the bit about ‘rubbing your conservativeness all over me’. Sounds kinda naughty in a way!! Your poems are always interesting in their use of phrase.
🙂
Isn’t wonderful to feel worthy and be inspired?! Nice poem.
thanks suzi..
this is really great. love that you used the word gushed… awesome. thank you for the nice comment on my poem and i am glad you did so that i have discovered your page.
thank you 700 miles..
if theres one thing i would ever like, is to be able to inspire someone to walk the path with me…
nice poem
nice and simple..liked it 🙂
thanks ani..
Wow. I like this poem. You left me with a smile.
thanks RAE
Beautiful use of words here and I love the style. Thanks for taking time out to comment on my poem.. I shall return here again:>)
thank you penelope
as you rubbed
your conservativeness
all over me
…oooh yeah great stuff
Luke
my others are here –
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/08/19/communication/
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/06/26/257/
thanks luke..
So beautiful! Thanks for the smile.
tq adk.. 🙂
nicely done!
tq mair..
Nicely done! You will have to keep an open mind for two. That might be a challenge…
two? two? why two? haha!
Differences attract! 🙂