I was no king
when I made you queen
and the courts of Christendom
were outraged
when the damsels and jesters
and the learned is flattered
the bishop and knights
went on the defensive
.
I was no king
when I made you queen
and the courts of Christendom
went berserk
when God and spirit
and the sky is flattered
they stopped us
at the drawbridge..
.
.
.
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Awesome my friend…actually perfect for Potluck too 🙂 xxx
tq buttercup.. inspiration and prompts are two different things.. good if it coincides..
Interesting take, fiveloaf. I think you could
take this one further. Storming Heaven —
not with a ticket, but with a trespass.
haha nice try..
wow,
did I miss your poem?
fantastic treat, catching it up now.
🙂
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awards,
pass to 1 to 10 friends..
Happy Weekend!
xxx
thank you ji..
Beautiful!! Hope you’re doing good
Happy Sunday 🙂
tq alethea..
This is kind of like a verse from old times.
Like the campfire folk tales.
Great poem
thanks severny..
Kris,
Your poem is beautiful. You are growing in style and confidence!
Well done….
Thank you for visiting my blog and leaving your very kind comments.
Best wishes,
Eileen
tq eileen- i try to introduce a new style each time haha..
I would love to know what your thoughts were on this poem…do you mind sharing with me those thoughts? 🙂 heartspell
it is about a relationship that the church forbids..
I wish you peace and love. Heartspell
tq heartspell and same to you too..
hmmm…. left me with a lot of questions… but I like!
all my poems are about my life polluted.. and thanks for visiting..
lovely poem 🙂
tq harshi..
fiveloaf,
that was great, but i am sorry it did sound rather regal. are you sure your blood is not blue?
Joyce
haha- if my blood is blue i would have more reasons to worry about my subjects rather than immersing myself in deep thoughts here joycie!
The places your muse wonders to always amazes me each time I read your work…you did fantastic in this…btw, if you were no king when u made her queen…I wonder!..lol
Cheers!
haha my lord, you knew better than what parliament could offer cos i am learning how to run a kingdom here..
Enthralling piece.
tq das and welcome to my blog..
If not of royal birth perhaps you can be voted in. You have my vote. Good poem and leaves me with questions.
tq dan- i am humbled by your flattery gesture
This is a wonderful piece of poetry – in philosophy the description of this relationship is going from the pit to the palace; from the untouchable to the brahmin. That in itself amazes not just us but also the heavenly beings. Well done!
thank you mangoes and tangoes..
I believe you could be a king by the way you define your life not adhering to the norm…might just be different enough to invent your own box rather than work with the same one everyone else is. Way to think outside the box so to speak!
thanks 2zpoint- couldnt agree better.. 🙂
Love is the greatest and God is love. This only i believe.
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