thanks louise for your comments and its a pleasure knocking on my neighbors door not so much as to borrow some ice cream! hah just kiddin.. you’re welcome louise!
thanks liv.. you are a talent yourself to be able to observe and discover the many facets of poetry writing available out there and experimented it with great success..
no problem heather- i was on sabbatical from jingle for quite awhile.. so nice to meet you and thank you for coming by and feel free to come by anytime!
fiveloaf 
Now I like this … Well done. Poem on …
Did I wish you happy 2011? If not, I do.
thanks jamie.. a good year for you too!
short, sweet and interesting! says a lot more than the words. well done! 🙂
and best wishes for 2011!!
thanks dishlicious and a great year for you too!
great!
powerful!
tq hermio..
lol – nice, I really like 🙂
That is really nice. Simple but with a clear meaning. Simplicity is the key after all.
tq brennan..
i’d like to see this on a picture somewhere
oh how? a snapshot? thanks kyoichi..
i have a vivid image
thanks robin..
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it is a home run.
well put,
have fun in the rally.
😉
thanks ji..
Short but meaningful – I love your style 😉
thanks magher- my style is no style cos i am an amature writer haha!
Love it. Short and to the point, and really paints a picture of the scene.
tq azfree..
short and to the point. makes me want to know more.
you do? thanks lola..
Aww… that says SOME story alright!!! I hope those doors have opened to you, FL…
Wish you a very happy 2011 !!!
thanks kavi and a good new year for you also!
Short but telling… Happy 2011!
hey thanks ina and same to you too! thank you for your comment..
I loved this – so many different meanings in such well-chosen words. Awesome!
thank you talon!
Here’s to being satiated!
haha heartspell.. satiated?
Nice one 🙂
Happy newyear 🙂
thanks hindawy.. have a happy new year to you too!
ah ha…reminds me of the poem called “Fleas”
the whole poem is:
Adam had em
? is it? haha thanks for the info..
Cool poem. Thanks for sharing.
no prob chris..
I really liked the haiku-like form, and the words are pure energy! well done, thx for sharing
thank you tuffi..
Short piece yet full of life. Well done and good day.
same to you too cesar and have a good year ahead!
Nicely done!! Thanks for sharing!
thanks joy!
Hmmm.. I hope you were welcomed.. 🙂
Wishing you a beautiful 2011
Love xx
thanks olivia- i am i am haha! and a glorious year for you too!
short but sweet.
thanx for stopping by..
tq dakshi and welcome dakshi!
I have been in that relationship!
wow! you did? and did you feel good or sour in emptiness?
such concise and powerful diction, Kris, well done my friend 🙂
thanks imagina.. it is but a feeling at that moment.. never knew there is power behind it.. 🙂
The cycles of nature
the rudiments of relationship maybe?
Nice! I really enjoy this.
Thank you.
thank you cloaked monk!
Very succinct and powerful!
Love the style.
PS — and thanks for dropping by my place. Glad your visit lead me here!
thanks louise for your comments and its a pleasure knocking on my neighbors door not so much as to borrow some ice cream! hah just kiddin.. you’re welcome louise!
Nicely done – short yet volumous in the inference! Have a great 2011~
thanks ab and the same wishes goes back to you too!
Works on many levels. Very impressive! Thanks.
thanks michael..
Short, sweet, and so true. Well done.
tq rachel..
Ah… to be the object of such attention…
Eh? whats that? haha…
Wow…
tq orange.. and hv a nice day!
Concise and oh so universally experienced! Or maybe it’s just us passionate poets. 😉
ooooooooh yes it must be us passionate poets as you described it haha..!
Can’t get much more “mini-skirted” than that, Fiveloaf! 🙂
Loved your short but expressive writing here. Thanks.
thank you bodhi…
Straight to the point!
haha yea or i wouldnt have bunked in but sent a sms instead!
Many levels, physical, emotional, spiritual, work with this poem. Simple but deep.
you are a great assessor dan.. your talent?
So few words but in a very big way, says a lot… great one five
thank you words4a friend..
True talent–to be able to say so much in few words.
thanks liv.. you are a talent yourself to be able to observe and discover the many facets of poetry writing available out there and experimented it with great success..
Sexy and sweet! Loved this!
sexy? haha the doorstep bunk could lead to good and bad things really..
Short, crisp, amazing , truthful.
~ http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2010/12/29/sunshine-on-my-shoulder/
yes purvi, everyone can relate to realism better than imagery..
Short and sweet, I like it.
The Lonely Recluse.
thanks lonely..
I am always delighted when see someone say a whole volume in as few words as you do. It is a real skill! Good job! hugs, pat
thank my mind pat. its my mind haha!
There you have it.
i do! i do! llyn!
Good short write! I like
thank you r0013
Short and cute massage
Thanks Madan..
Ah, love this!
thanks deadpoet88!
Like it! Some days I wish I had to bunk in front of someone’s house for food….might lose some weight. I better be careful in what I wish for.
haha! and that is so funny thursday haha!
love it and so fitting for our world.
thanks lmcgregor..
This says a lot and leaves you to read into it with your own view. I enjoy. Thank you!
thank you marlee-i..
Cannot believe I just found you. I mean your poetry ha ha
Your work is so full of emotion. Lovely.
no problem heather- i was on sabbatical from jingle for quite awhile.. so nice to meet you and thank you for coming by and feel free to come by anytime!
this haiku is interesting
thank you dancing freak~
i wonder what your hungering for, fiveloaf……
the want of nearness bella..
well said…
JP
thank you tas..
Strong write…
thanks fistful..
Sorry about coming so late. Love it! Congrats on being featured on Jingle Poetry last week!
thank you lisa..