nothing smells sweeter than
the fragrance from the east
a budding chinoiserie
that thresholds the paddy pond
and the lallang filled path
leaves stretching upward to the sky..
the moon noticed
and beamed its widest smile!
why do you try so hard little flower?
aren’t you scared of the coming monsoon?
in quiet dignity
she mused
longingly she stood unafraid..
as the bleak evening passed
and morning whistles its cock crow tune
the little bud bloomed
her sweet fragrance now permeates the air
for she knew
that he would ramble out from
his shed in curiosity
to follow the fragrance
as the smell took over where the snuffed candles fade
in an inkling
there he was-
nonchalantly picking her up
minding her every petal…
tucked it into his dust jacket
& took her home.
the sun grinned..
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Sounds like a cool place to be
and thats a determined little flower
Even the title is enticing.
Great job
thanks a million- guess we have alot in common- visual arts, cooking etc etc but, i only filled up my blog with poems..!
welcome in….
YEAH!
😉
lovely piece from the east.
🙂
you are real fast..
hope that you do well,
do find time looking around, pick up things you like to enjoy..
Happy Monday!
xxx
this is about the single most ingenuity you have done jingle and of course with the help of all our loyal friends like amanda, kavita, buttercup etc. i like this and i know its going to be a big hit!
her persistance paid off…and the sun smiling there at the end is a nice touch…
hey thanks brian..
oh you do so delicately express the purest essence of the east into a few petals tucked away….lovely…bkm
hey bkm- tq!
Wow, perfectly…written 😛 I wish I am there!XD
tq rikka- are you korean?
An encounter and fresh fragrance from the east..your word flow is superb and loved the ending with the sun grinning Fiveload!! So happy to see you linked at Poetry Potluck, your support means the world to us and your dedication’s valued. Much love my friend xx
of cos i will support haha!
This was so charming and so well done. It had me smiling, too. Lovely poem!
🙂 tq talon..
She was such a lucky little flower to be picked by him who was so drawn to her beauty…. this poem touches my heart…. your words are always so lovely. 🙂 Heartspell
you read very well heartspell.. 🙂
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thank you for enlightening this stupid me haha 🙂
fiveloaf, what sweetness you possess. what was she? i am betting an orchid. i wore a single orchid to the prom, spent the night in its aura.
haha it is up to your imagination almond!
fiveloaf, what sweetness you possess. what was she? i am betting an orchid. i wore a single orchid to the prom, spent the night in her aura.
wohoho! i am repeating my comment here..
this is such a beautiful poem of encounters. Bravo!!
tq tekia..
Oh the power of the unseen scent to allure us to beauty and beyond. Hi.
thanks 47.. you dug really deep into my beginning haha! thats cool..