perfectly true! Nothing is as regretful as bowing to others wishes and forgetting one’s self… Seclusion, serenity, and love in my own terms are my recharger! love it!
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Yes ..I agree with you….regret champions when you lose control of your life ……we are bothered to take control for not hurting the loved ones…..soooooo beautiful….
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Seems to me that this calls out for the Superhero … Clark Kent sacrificing his life for the good of the world, longing for his Lois Lane. And in real life, all the people who try and fill their inner yearning by sacrificing themselves for whatever cause they are pursuing…whether family, environment, etc. Very good commentary on the human condition.
The first line made its hit.. Yes, seclusion is being misunderstood… and the next line which captures me is love is sacrificing one’s own wishes…
You penned all so neatly in this piece… An impressive and insightful piece for me..
Thanks for dropping at Tingtasy and provided me with this link… This poem.. is very therapeutic to me so I’ll return to read it again.. a kind of comfort for me, this is.. 🙂
Your poem is very insightful. Love and sacrifice are part of what two people share in a relationship. Living on the terms of just one becomes a problem. Sacrificing too much of self isn’t good either. Thanks for sharing.
Personally, I like it. It had a message and it was clear. However, I don’t think that “serenity is being accommodative” because your needs are being out weighed by the other person’s needs. You can’t take care of someone else if not yourself first. <<Is that why there is regret?
You’ve done an amazing job condensing a powerful and important message into such a few number of words! For me, it’s a matter of balancing what I do for the those I love while not living a life that feels false to me. Sacrifice and accommodation are fine if they are practiced by all parties in a relationship at times.
You’ve just reminded me about one of Graham Bell’s quotes: *When one door closes, another opens; but we often look so long and so regretfully upon the closed door that we do not see the one which has opened for us.*
I like the way you write, thank you for sharing
/Eclipse
thought-provoking…. i’m still stuck on “seclusion is being misunderstood”… i love to be alone, in silence so that i am able to get a hold of myself and come from a place where i am understood–first to myself.
Hmmm…you say so much in such a short piece, here. Life is too short for regrets, in my humble opinion. Do you regret the sacrifice(s) or the loss of control? 🙂 Well written. I am impressed and admire your succinct-ness.
Nicely done! I think this is a very mature message, and I think you did it justice. I was impressed that I could read only the last words, or the first and last words, and still get the same message! You’ve got this Rubik’s cube of a poem…great word choice. Thank you for responding to my work.
Putting oneself last is not a bad thing, but “last” means you will eventually take care of oneself. But all along, being true to one’s core values while being “accommodating” is important too. Interesting poem.. I like it.
A wonderful piece. You said so much in so little words, that’s a gift. I agree with your words, “serenity is being accommodative,”
I’ve learned the truth of this in my life. In order to be a peacemaker and to have some serenity in our lives some times we have to compromise, but I’ve also learned that in order to have true serenity, I have to be happy with myself and sometimes that means standing up for what is right in spite of the fact that things will get a bit chaotic for a bit. In the end the serenity my heart and mind feel help to make me a better person and in so doing, enable me to be a better peace maker.
I don’t know if I explained my self well, but this is everything that your poem kind of brought to my mind. You are indeed a talented person. May your day be wonderfully blessed!
so we are all secluded in our own way. this i can understand. i am missing the connection between accommodating and serenity.
it is commonplace to be accommodative towards people in order to maintain peace..
it seems like peace is maintained at the expense of someone. usually the least powerful of the group and the serenity is just an illusion.
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Oh this is so true … peace “at all cost” is often a hefty price.
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thanks becca- you said it well enough..
thanks for clearing that up, that went right past me on the first couple readings… got it now!
a prett profound bit of stuff here fiver!
thanks scott..
I think seclusion is being safe, but it doesn’t change its relationship with regret.
Really good. Thanks for mentioning it to me…
thank you evelyn..
perfectly true! Nothing is as regretful as bowing to others wishes and forgetting one’s self… Seclusion, serenity, and love in my own terms are my recharger! love it!
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thanks bended..
dude. Truth is this. You totally nailed it.
wooooo- you sounded like randy in american idol? haha thanks irene..
Yes ..I agree with you….regret champions when you lose control of your life ……we are bothered to take control for not hurting the loved ones…..soooooo beautiful….
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tq rashmi..
very true! simple and straightforward poem! i like it!
🙂 thanks julian
Seems to me that this calls out for the Superhero … Clark Kent sacrificing his life for the good of the world, longing for his Lois Lane. And in real life, all the people who try and fill their inner yearning by sacrificing themselves for whatever cause they are pursuing…whether family, environment, etc. Very good commentary on the human condition.
thanks cloaked..
The first line made its hit.. Yes, seclusion is being misunderstood… and the next line which captures me is love is sacrificing one’s own wishes…
You penned all so neatly in this piece… An impressive and insightful piece for me..
Thanks for dropping at Tingtasy and provided me with this link… This poem.. is very therapeutic to me so I’ll return to read it again.. a kind of comfort for me, this is.. 🙂
thanks kris..
Your poem is very insightful. Love and sacrifice are part of what two people share in a relationship. Living on the terms of just one becomes a problem. Sacrificing too much of self isn’t good either. Thanks for sharing.
you are as insightful too dan! thanks..
I make every effort to live without regret.
and you are a living eden kim.. you breathe live to the downtrodden!
Love & sacrifice. Yup I think we can all relate to this..
Its beautiful.
tq luna.. 🙂
true. when you live. it is one without regret.
thanks black glass moon
Awesome, reminds me of being a parent, I give up many things for my daughter, which is ok. The smile on her face is excellent!
thanks paulo..
well done job…
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tq ji..
I love the absolute clarity of your words and the remembrance that martyrdom may not always be the best.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/03/02/and-then-came-the-laughter/
yea 🙂
Personally, I like it. It had a message and it was clear. However, I don’t think that “serenity is being accommodative” because your needs are being out weighed by the other person’s needs. You can’t take care of someone else if not yourself first. <<Is that why there is regret?
this is how it feels like when one is caught in an awkward situation or a scandal NcMerci..
very thoughtful and clever piece… a little bittersweet approach. i like it! 😀
tq mag..
very nicely done here 🙂 REALLY!
tq sina..
My question – is there any way to champion the first four lines but not losing control of your own life?
no clariice..
Yes, if we neglect our own needs and have regret what kind of life is that? Wonderful, Kris!
the life of a popular individual potmarked by rumors..
Regret could be our single biggest enemy and must be conquered..well put:)
depending on the scenario vishwas..
Wow, such a powerful messages in this one, amazing job!
thanks thoughts..
You’ve done an amazing job condensing a powerful and important message into such a few number of words! For me, it’s a matter of balancing what I do for the those I love while not living a life that feels false to me. Sacrifice and accommodation are fine if they are practiced by all parties in a relationship at times.
🙂 thanks lola..
it’s a gorgeous piece!
love is sacrificing your own wishes
to stop others from getting hurt
and then
regret is championing all these
while losing control of your own life..
it’s a deep poem, a deep sense of introspection yet…yet sacrifice made intentionally. It’s really good.
tq kolembo..
beautiful thoughts here. it is all about balance I suppose?
it is about something that affects me to be more accurate ina..
Regret is rather nasty feeling, stay away from it Kris … Happy Rally!
thanks scent..
Beautifully written. It’s so often that I tell people not to regret. Somehow, you make regret becomes a beautiful thing to do. 🙂 Well done Kris.
thanks ashley.. maybe its how i worded it!
True words no doubt.
thanks debi..
This feels very Buddhist in a way; but sort of at an end stage of life.
I think we’ve all have these moments. Keep preaching, friend. 🙂
thanks liu..
Wow, now this is profound! I read it a few times, taking in more each time. Very brilliant piece, one of your best that I’ve read.
thanks sonam..
Sad yet true… but sometimes the feeling of regret may not be so strong :)… powerful write.
applies to me..
Aa- speechless. *your words strike through my heart
“love is sacrificing your own wishes
to stop others from getting hurt”
but will this love save him/herself from getting hurt? ^^
Short, but lasts. Thanks for sharing this. 🙂
tq dhitz..
brilliant and perfect, congrats!
thanks dag..
Oh so true… but thats life~ great words and well put
thanks krissie..
Another beautiful poem heaped with meaning. I enjoyed it.
The Lonely Recluse.
thank you lonely..
Love the way these all have some truth for most people. Great write Fiveloaf !
Thank you for visiting our blog too !
Happy Rally !
thanks jl..
super write, as always! thanks for sharing.
thanks dishlicious..
You’ve just reminded me about one of Graham Bell’s quotes: *When one door closes, another opens; but we often look so long and so regretfully upon the closed door that we do not see the one which has opened for us.*
I like the way you write, thank you for sharing
/Eclipse
oh really? hmm- that’s great eclipse! thanks for coming by..
a very meaningful post, Kris! lovely entry to the rally!
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thanks leo..
Fantastic write, life is a balancing act sometimes, though often the weights are not even
i know what you mean ab.. thanks!
thought-provoking…. i’m still stuck on “seclusion is being misunderstood”… i love to be alone, in silence so that i am able to get a hold of myself and come from a place where i am understood–first to myself.
being alone is different from scandal prompted seclusion robin… thanks!
Hmmm…you say so much in such a short piece, here. Life is too short for regrets, in my humble opinion. Do you regret the sacrifice(s) or the loss of control? 🙂 Well written. I am impressed and admire your succinct-ness.
and to achieve that peace, you distance yourself from confrontation that will raise more questions..
a powerful message in a few words! the formatting seems unique too. so well done.
thanks dr..
I feel as if I can relate to this…nice write
tq reg..
Nicely done! I think this is a very mature message, and I think you did it justice. I was impressed that I could read only the last words, or the first and last words, and still get the same message! You’ve got this Rubik’s cube of a poem…great word choice. Thank you for responding to my work.
tq two mary’s
I really appreciate the way you have order the thoughts here.
Opening the particular way you did gives so much authority to what you go on to say.
That idea of being misunderstood, and consequently misplaced, gives extra strength to what you go on to express.
It adds bravery to the fearless baring of what you feel.
Well done. Keep it up!
tq dust and water ..
And it all feels like a whirlwind sometimes. And what is the purpose of it, I wonder, if it goes unbeheld?
haha thanks notatame
Great poem by the way.
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The first line was jsut wow !!
And that set the whole poem rolling ..
Amazing words ! Loved this ..
thanks ladynimue..
true..and depends upon how we take it
thanks iwrite4u..
Putting oneself last is not a bad thing, but “last” means you will eventually take care of oneself. But all along, being true to one’s core values while being “accommodating” is important too. Interesting poem.. I like it.
thanks margaret..
i am losing control,,
don’t! haha..
lost in your poet,,
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eh? not possible i think.. thanks jasmine..
this is so true…we regret what we give up, but on the other hand it is the right thing to do..
thanks for stopping by my poem..
you figured it out pretty correctly chim..
A lesson for us all…well put!
not meant to advice anybody on anything silly..
Thoughtful–the short form works well.
tq miriam.. 🙂
A wonderful piece. You said so much in so little words, that’s a gift. I agree with your words, “serenity is being accommodative,”
I’ve learned the truth of this in my life. In order to be a peacemaker and to have some serenity in our lives some times we have to compromise, but I’ve also learned that in order to have true serenity, I have to be happy with myself and sometimes that means standing up for what is right in spite of the fact that things will get a bit chaotic for a bit. In the end the serenity my heart and mind feel help to make me a better person and in so doing, enable me to be a better peace maker.
I don’t know if I explained my self well, but this is everything that your poem kind of brought to my mind. You are indeed a talented person. May your day be wonderfully blessed!
http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/08/the-fairies-did-it.html
tq elezena