Because man is still a beast when all is said and done, and he puts lines then builds walls and fences to protect ‘his’ territory from other predators but while we still practice such cruelty to other animals we are not civilised yet, at all.
Nice write and thanks for visiting me.
Thank you for your visit and comment you left behind. Love your blog and always stop by to read it all the time. Leave my comment behind and then look again for your entry into a new place. Thanks http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/08/the-crimson-witch/
True this is, although it makes you wonder, if not for these lines would cultures and tradiotions bwe more blended? Would there still be racism? Questions that can’t be defenitly be answered. Either way, good job, short, but also thought provoking. keep it up. ^^
I love that you wrote about lines instead of fences….fresh and clever. When I was growing up, there were very few fences. We could ride our horses a long ways and never have to open a gate. If our cows wandered away, we could always find them in their favorite spots nearby. And we sat on the front porch and talked to the neighbors as they walked by or stopped for a chat. There were no walls or fences around our houses, nor did we sit in the back yard…always the front. Seems more civilized and friendly to me. Here in Brazil, you will not find a house in town without a wall around it. Fortunately I live in the country without walls. I do have a fence but only because the cows love my lettuce. Thanks for a special write and the sweet memories it brought back for me. Hugs, pat
I remember a lesson in my college: about man creating his/her own specific space – a place – by marking his/her surrounding. It is an act of possession. If human starts to value their possession more than sharing it with others, will the world ok with that? 😉
Your poem is short but meaningful. Great job. d^.^b
Divisions lead to separation and difference, the Earth knows better. Good write!
tq paulo my friend- it had been awhile..
Lines and fences, keep out, keep in, boxing us up.
agree dan and thats why the write..
And so it began. Nice write!
My entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/07/cannonball-3/
tq charles for your comment!
simple life, men make it complex,
lovely concept.
Happy Rally.
🙂
🙂 thank you orange tree for liking and for your comment..
Awesome execution! 🙂
tq mhir for liking and for your comment!
Concise and to the point. Perfect.
Here is my entry:
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/09/scribbles.html
thanks jack – never more concise haha!
cute and smart..
i am i am! oh! you are not referring to me?.. 🙂
Simple yet profound.
hey thanks leonargo..
Love it! Concise and provocative. I have a bunch of 4 line stuff like that, I call it my fridge magnet material. 😉
fridge magnet? haha! yea.. thanks blitzken..
tq creativitytothemax for liking this..
Because man is still a beast when all is said and done, and he puts lines then builds walls and fences to protect ‘his’ territory from other predators but while we still practice such cruelty to other animals we are not civilised yet, at all.
Nice write and thanks for visiting me.
🙂 tq daydreamertoo..
A person could write a book based on those four telling lines.
Larry
yea! especially for the great debaters out there haha! tq larry..
Love this idea! Seems like a response to Frost’s “Mending Wall”…
oh and what is that muzzle? anyway thanks for liking and your comment..
Very true and with plenty of space left for imagination. I do like poems that make my mind carry on pondering after the words end! Like, like, like!
tq cc..
True, true, true!!!!!
hahaha tq sherrie for liking and your comment!
Thank you for your visit and comment you left behind. Love your blog and always stop by to read it all the time. Leave my comment behind and then look again for your entry into a new place. Thanks
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/08/the-crimson-witch/
tq sarah.. 🙂
a grand opening for a longer poem or story.
masterful job.
🙂
perhaps it is, perhaps it is haha! thanks noiseless..
Amusing. Step over the line!
yea please be my guest haha!
short but great….
thanx for dropping by….
tq dakshi..
It’s not just poetry but also philosophy, you reminded me of Lefebvre and his production of social space theory. Intelligent writing here. ❤
Thanks for stopping by my entry.
Take care and keep smiling.
yea- keep smiling and thanks for your comment and good wishes kenia..
True this is, although it makes you wonder, if not for these lines would cultures and tradiotions bwe more blended? Would there still be racism? Questions that can’t be defenitly be answered. Either way, good job, short, but also thought provoking. keep it up. ^^
Oh wow, Lot’s of typos. -.-
Traditions* and be*
no worries
yea-thanks ankoku..
tq janrae,,
insightful, and with a smile– nice!
thanks mair..
I love that you wrote about lines instead of fences….fresh and clever. When I was growing up, there were very few fences. We could ride our horses a long ways and never have to open a gate. If our cows wandered away, we could always find them in their favorite spots nearby. And we sat on the front porch and talked to the neighbors as they walked by or stopped for a chat. There were no walls or fences around our houses, nor did we sit in the back yard…always the front. Seems more civilized and friendly to me. Here in Brazil, you will not find a house in town without a wall around it. Fortunately I live in the country without walls. I do have a fence but only because the cows love my lettuce. Thanks for a special write and the sweet memories it brought back for me. Hugs, pat
thanks pat for liking and for your comment..
Short but profound with a clear message. Well done!!! 🙂
thanks poetry and ice cream for liking and your comment..
Strong statement, imagine what it could have been had we not done so!!!!
yea- thanks for liking and for your comment my friend..
This reminds me of the quote “If they give you ruled paper, write the other way” -Juan Ramón Jiménez. Thanks for visiting Mandy Calvin’s Quill
thanks quill
Powerful brevity.
tq ector..
Very deep and true..in some words you exhibited just the right lines!
tq alcina..
Wonderful!!!!
tq malini
true. that is why the safest place on earth is the cemetery… because everyone’s dead there.
huh? bro? knock! knock! haha! thanks for your comment..
man and their destructive tendencies… tsk. we self destruct yet we think we create a better world. man is blind.
very cool …says a lot about human destruction in so few words ….thank you x
meant to be- you hit the right spot kez.. tq for your comment! 🙂
I remember a lesson in my college: about man creating his/her own specific space – a place – by marking his/her surrounding. It is an act of possession. If human starts to value their possession more than sharing it with others, will the world ok with that? 😉
Your poem is short but meaningful. Great job. d^.^b
tq dhitz for your comment and for liking it!
Very nice poem, exactly the right length to make it stick firmly in the back of my mind
huhu tq freeharry for your comment..
tq irene for liking..
That was like a great enigma! O.O Nice!
tq tickly for your comment..
This poem is so small and so powerful and so, so true…
tq classic nyer..
true. it was all simple then lines messed it up.
tq d..
NICE! 🙂
tq heyloworld for liking and for your comment..
Such a short poem to draw so many comments! It is worth it, though!
tq donna.. interaction is always good for our mind!
Hello.
Short, sweet & oh so true.
How times have changed!
Thanks for sharing & for the visit too.
Under Blinking Stars
tq andy..
Loved it – short, simple, but thought provoking. Wonderful! Thanks for sharing! 🙂
tq cherlyn..
i dug it very much… so simple… so deep… and so true…
thanks papo for liking and for your comment..
So so very true. Very powerful words! Kudos!
tq shonejai..
I love short smart poems like this!
tq marit…:)
Good poem. We are animals who love boundaries, just most animals don’t make them in straight lines!
tq duncan for liking and for your comment..
Great symbolism in your words! I love it how your poems always make me stop and ponder for a bit.
tq magher..
So true–so smart, Kris!
tq bodhi..
man did not only draw the lines on the floor… structures were built and nature is slowly destroyed..
nice haiku
yea nate and tq.. i had that written also..
When will the day dawn when these lines are erased…when it is too late…
Rosie
they wont. man are terriitorial? thanks for coming by..
Very good to meditate upon.
thanks just sayin..
MMmmm … gets you thinking.
Very nicely done.
Isadora
http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/09/14/autumn-a-will-i-must-obey/
tq isadora..
Lines indeed, very nicely done and well conceived!
tq shanyns
Your brevity here is inspiring. ~MsQ
tq ms queenly..
Reminded me of the oening sequence of Space Odessey 2001
oh and was the opening like this? tq maitreyee for your comment..
haha so true…
keep writing!
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RoHiT
dial-a-denial.blogspot.com
tq rohit