if the world ends now
i would say fine, let it
if that is what it takes
to start a life with you
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to start a life with you
if that is what it takes
i would say fine, be it
if the world ends now..
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fiveloaf 
feeling this…..
yes hannah, feel it! 🙂
Amazing..
A perfect mirror image 🙂
thank you sumit..
Now this is what I call genius 🙂
thank you littlemisshomosapien.. but i am not a genius haha!
oh nicely done!
you think so? thanks kathe..
a strong bold picture of fearless, focused devout love you’ve painted with these lovely thoughts of yours…
bold and fearless sounds more like a lion in the desert haha! thanks heartspell..
Each word seems carefully chosen.
Its so clean.
you think so? haha! thanks fillingahole..
i wonder can love be that great…
“^o^” “^o^” read the next poem..
I knew there would be more to this conversation.
thanks sam and best wishes for the new year..
Wow…this is brilliant! Love the fact that it says so much, and it’s like a mirror image. Powerful words
like a mirror image is perfect cos they are a few differences in which you took notice.. wow thanks!
Love the mirror form, and the subject of romance, an added bonus. Found you at Jingle being interviewed, you VIP (Very Important Poet)!
Also tracked down your fave bloggers, so thanks for supplying their URLs. Jingle is great about networking all of us. So glad I found you.
Amy Barlow Liberatore
thank you amy..
wow
tq dakshi..
Amazing words and an amazing thought – to be with a loved one for eternity. What kind of poetry is this ?
Chloe xx
if you ask me chloe, this is one of my mini skirt poetry that looks like there is a mirror in between the top and bottom stanza haha! other technical jargons and you need to ask mr. keats… 🙂
That is a FANTASTIC reply!!! lol Have a great day xx 🙂
😉 you too!
wow.
and congrats on the Celebrate Poet 2010 award!!
thanks heather and wow! you alerted me to some shocking news and i am going to share it with you!
If the world ends now, I’d say fine , let it.
At least I knew you I found you i loved you….even for an instant before it all came crashing..
huh? haha ok amro..
I was just continuing the poem. =p
aw shux, this is so sweet mr.fivey! hehe cute , short , and simple! i love it!
please check mine too: “Beyond Silent Wars”
thanks julian..
Nice..short & poignant
thanks maitreyee
Remind me of a song Let it be…
haha oh? let it be? look at the mirrored repetition on both stanzas krislin..
1
2
3
4
~
4
3
2
1
see anything yet?
you simply amaze me Five… or shall i call you brother…:-))
whichever is also fine buddy!
for life is lived and not endured..
wow aashi! cool!
this poem reminds me of that song, if the world ends now, love sweet love, something like that…
i truly amaze by ur words…
my link: http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/04/postcard-from-heaven.html
haha you are talking about burt bacharach if i am not mistaken chim!
it is clever, beautiful and smart and a very good poem.
thanks ina- wow!
Love the structure. Clever one! (as usual ;))
thanks mag..
Soft,sweet ,smart poem….a mirror image and that too so wonderful…
tq rashmi..
Love it!
thanks golden hair bear!
intensely satisfying
tq paulami..
Great poem. I love the structure of the repeated ‘if’.
thanks jack
excellent poem – very well composed
tq dthaase
Very well composed! Loved it 😀
Hugs xx
thanks olivia
loved it
tq poetsandall
Love the reflective mood and the peace you advocated in my soul…thank you friend! 🙂
welcome john..
whatever it takes…
yes robin- whatever it takes
Just wonderful and so romantic.
woooooooooo yea teri!
This is beautiful and touching.
tq linda
All that matters is the love. Sweetly moving.
tq jamie
Ah yes! I can most certainly relate to that feeling… great sense of aching and need!
tq danielle
precisely written n loved it 🙂
thanks anum
It is a nice poem. Very short, but conveys exactly what it needs to. Nice job!
tq ewan
This makes me want to break my pencil!
oh no you dont krm haha!
Oh yeah that’s IT
thanks sherrie
Hey its like viewing a verse in a mirror. Nice! Nice.
thanks mihir..
That’s passionate love if you don’t even mind if the world ends.
yes yes haha thanks gayle!
L O V E L Y !!
i just like the promise in this. very very nice 😉
Peace n Bliss ~
promise yes and thanks sina..
wow.
you are divine!
🙂
not at all godly ji..
No doubt you want it to happen… Nice love hyperbolic!
yes yes seabell haha!
like the way you’ve repeated words to connect throughout.. like needle and thread..
thanks soulprincess- you can too if you like!
Very nicely done!
tq aleza
Like how you echo back here 🙂
thanks mair..
Gorgeous!
thanks thoughtsnotlost..
brilliant… what a clever word play.
thanks raj
Intense… Really cleverly done!
thanks krisse
loved the way you said your thoughts in four lines and the mirroring four lines- clever word play here.
tq butterflies of time..
If the world ends now, I’m sure you’ll have time to get in three or four more poems. Keep a note pad handy. Enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.
haha thats cute dan! thanks for coming by..
Very clever…that’s so cool
thanks panda..
Incredible structure! 🙂
you think so sparrow? hohoho~~
a world ending love
barely begun
something like that lucychili
You really know how to make an impact with a few words. Great! Just love the way you do it!
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/04/07/lovers-we-are-now/
thanks tasi
I heart this. I can feel this! Keep writing.
heart this? oic thanks neeraja
wow….such a simple way to put it …and yet so effective !!!!
BTW, thanx for visiting my blog.
welcome meghna to my blog..
Mirror of th mirrors! Loved it 🙂
tq eclipse
Inspiring! Thank you.
thanks kay..
Thinking..thinking..
Thats so unusual and beautiful a thought..
Nice write-up..
thanks alcina
a smart write … and endearing too.
thanks baishali
Your mirroring is beautiful.
thanks booguloo..
love the courage in here. brilliant write 🙂
thanks bended
the simplicity is just so brilliant 🙂
thanks shreyar
great. reminds me of Frost’s “Fire and Ice.”
frosts who? haha never know, never read! thanks emily..
Wow, powerful and accepting. These words go straight into the core of one’s being! Perfect rhythm and flow.
thanks ana..
With you at world’end…lovely concept.
Beautiful!
Let it be it!!!
tq sara..
what a brilliant piece! indeed, love is all that matters no matter what.
http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/04/remembrance.html
woohoo pink! you reappeared after you dissapeared haha! thanks!
* feeling * you convey so much in few words.. great.. here is my rally poem… a dream she is… a kiss seals…
Someone is Special
thanks someone is special..
Fantastic! There is so much passion that flows from this
tq ab
Witty and meaningful. Loved it!
thanks sliver
Impressive! Another awesome write.
tq david..
Wow! Short and sweet! \
So let it be, so I can be with you! 🙂
Beautiful lines…:)
nice mirror-ing 😀
thanks becca
You have such a way with words and are so good at expressing your feelings that you make the reader want those expressions to be directed at him/her. 🙂 This was wonderful, fiveloaf.
thanks dragon..
Been there. I love it.
tq stephen
loved it Kris! the mirror works, and it speaks out. I think I’d prefer the reflection than the first verse 😉 hehe…
Rally Week 41 – My Poetry
your choice vinay and thanks! be right there in a jiffy!
EXCELLENT. (Caps intentional)
thanks notatamelion
all in the name of love! 🙂 nice work!
tq -D
Love it!
thanks april
So let it be! Amen. Nicely said and penned
tq melissa