let it be it

if the world  ends now

i would say fine,  let it

if that is what  it takes

to start a  life with you

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to start a  life with you

if  that is what  it takes

i would say fine,   be  it

if the world  ends now..

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167 responses to “let it be it

  1. Love the mirror form, and the subject of romance, an added bonus. Found you at Jingle being interviewed, you VIP (Very Important Poet)!

    Also tracked down your fave bloggers, so thanks for supplying their URLs. Jingle is great about networking all of us. So glad I found you.

    Amy Barlow Liberatore

  2. You have such a way with words and are so good at expressing your feelings that you make the reader want those expressions to be directed at him/her. 🙂 This was wonderful, fiveloaf.

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