(my first poem reposted- Nov 17th 2009)
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love takes away their breath
yet in that fatal breathlessness
they find life
like a lily blooming in winter
I relish in your cocoon
the sweet smell of scented petals
garnishing my thoughts
for I know I will never wilt
and dews will never form
only frozen in time
with you..
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fiveloaf 
Well done.
thank you- just an old reposting.. cos i cannot change the previous fonts haha..
You have a wonderful and unusual way with words.
You are such a prolific writer,
writing with such passion and wisdom ,
sensing emotions that only enhances your poetry.
I am so sorry I do not have the time to visit often but know that I do appreciate your creations from your heart, mind and soul.
Have you a great weekend.
hugs
shakira
from one malaysian to another- terima kasih..
You are a Malaysian?
WOW… awesome!
I know another Malaysian who is a poet too
but I am not a poet or even a writer,
I just love to blog and write.
Sama sama .
hugs
shakira
penang?
awesome.
thks trish
“garnishing my thoughts” LOVE it! Always so much fun to see what a verb can do in an unexpected place.
thks jannie- you are forever praising me..
this is a very enjoyable poem.
Wonderful thoughts
tq buddy..
My name is Piter Jankovich. oOnly want to tell, that your blog is really cool
And want to ask you: is this blog your hobby?
P.S. Sorry for my bad english
no worries piter- and yes, it is a hobby i am trying to find time with right now cos life is just hectic- thanks for dropping in a few lines and actually i manage to retrieve your message from spam..
A most beautiful experience! Love is the deepest well of inspiration and the meaning of life. Thank you so much for sharing your inspiration and for inspiring.
Peace,
Suzanne
“^o^” didnt know i would be so inspiring.. you really dug deep into the archives- very clever cos the best are always at the start!
beautiful… your poems always have that heartfelt quality, with distilled diction.. great works, fiveloaf 🙂
tq imagina.. come by anytime..