remain

we remain

forever close in the distance

of our own world

sharing the nearness

spaced by comforts

of our own choosing

.

we remain

a picture reflected in the lights

of our own breath

sharing the elusiveness

within the aches

of our tired heart

.

we remain

a grail

of our own heart

yet spaced in between heaven

and the tips of our finger

is a safe embrace that calls us

.

to remain..

.

.

.

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141 responses to “remain

  1. This is such an evocative poem, and also humbling, if that makes sense. there is an humbleness in reflection – recognition to love and another human soul

    joanny

    • no need to be sorry neutral haha- what i mean is we just got acquainted and before long, you would have discovered how diverse my poems are haha! i mean i love to try out new concepts by the day! cheers!

  2. Thank you for understanding. I would really love to dig deeper on learning from your writings. Thank you so much. Have a nice day! 🙂

  3. I too was taken by the concept of:
    “yet spaced in between heaven
    and the tips of our finger
    is a safe embrace that calls us”.
    To think of that, I guess that is where you are!

  4. sharing the nearness/spaced by comforts/of our own choosing

    i loved these lines. the repetition in many of your pieces, i’ve come to recognize, is a style of your own 🙂

  5. i wish i can write and put my emotions into words like this. these are heart-spoken words. i am in awe. 🙂

    hi fiveloaf, i’m back… thanks for the nice comment you left at SiS’ review of my blog.

  6. This is utterly beautiful fiveloaf…..especially the 2nd verse. I love the lines, “we remain//a picture reflected in the lights//of our own breath”
    Love it!
    Gloria

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