contaminated earth
polluted sea
a pocket in the sky
whatever for?
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mother earth is dying
children are crying
no man is breathing
are you still smiling?
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fiveloaf 
i am heartbroken over the way things are going ~ with the planet and with humanity. i wish the world would hear your roar!
i wish mankind will hear the cries in the still of the night dani- tq for liking and your comments..
UNFORTUNATELY ALL WHAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN IS ALL TO EVIDENT IN TODAYS WORLD. EXCELLENTLY WRITTEN.
Yvonne
thank you yvonne..
Sighs too deep for words.
hey thank cloaked..
tq david..
Truly mother Earth is polluted by the greed and ignorance of mankind.
Very nicely described in your poem.
tq umesh..
You write so briefly, and yet still so powerfully. Well done.
tq fountains for your comment and liking it..
brief and to the point – well done!
tq liliana
A poem with a strong message. Very good.
tq ina my friend
We will reap what we sow. Nice writing, my friend!
tq charles
I am not… Important message, Fiveloaf!
tq seabell
Powerful way to make your point! Very good. I loved it 😦
tq terri for your comment and liking it as well
A very powerful write. Our poor Earth.
tq thingy
Sad to see the world fail to recover from the immense negativity that is befalling it. I am a big fan of salvation and believe it won’t be long. Well done.
Psst, hey! the cartoon you is so cool. lol
Cheers!
haha thanks ibok! salvation? maybe it wont be long but when it comes, what are we to tell god? man has a tendency to make mistakes ever since our first hero ate the apple? haha!
sad..
😦 yea..
at least more and more people are becoming aware. unfortunately, the people who are aware are too compassionate and aren’t willing to do what needs to be done. the future generations will suffer, and will have to do the ugly deeds too.
never more correct zongrik..
wonderfully expressed, intense thinker your poem is. yes…I am still smiling for there are two truths. one is that there is still beauty in this world and as long as we can still find it there is still hope.
but your poem speaks the other truth as well 😦
tq hope..
I have great faith that there is great change going on around the world. There is still much to do but thousands are awakening and working toward a peaceful, loving world. Thanks for your view…it is not wrong, but it will soon be a thing of the past. Hugs, pat
very positive pat.. thanks!
I love a poem that makes you think. Nicely done my friend!
tq ghosterb..
Another great share and I love your blog so much. Thanks for the visit
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/04/haggle-baggily/
really? tq ann..
It is terrible what is happening to our planet. Well written!
tq diva..
You definitely cut deep with the precision of a surgeon on this write, brilliant
huhu surgical knife cuts clean, thanks ab.. 🙂
🙂 yes people do smile even if the earth is dying…
strange yea? unless man is a destructive being, we shouldnt be smiling right? thanks capture..
tq a.b., sarah, ghosterb and pat for liking this poem.. 😉
very song like “lyrics”
just add music
tq david for your comment. you think so?
tq jake..
not smiling of course, after reading those in your words.
smiles, powerful writing.
haha you can smile- to me of course! thanks morning..
Great poem. Love the final stanza.
thank you jack..
nice imagery and message you got there 🙂
thank you janrae..
You have captured the dire nature of our existence quite well. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my blog!
no prob celticsea.. and thank you!
the cost of evolution… 😦
sad but true, good one 🙂
Happy gooseberry day!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/09/02/the-dream-where-you-at/
tq lynn..
I think you might be underestimating the earth but I like it anyway.
Thanks.
oh i might be- is there anything that you like to say dave? thank you!
Awful to contemplate. A pocketful of sky whatever for my favorite juxtaposition.
thanks manic..
tq beckyboyle for liking my post..
the world is coming to an end….but its about the end of days in the bible…
tq chimnese
I have seen psychic art of Gaia suffering from pollution. The lay lines of earth are attached to her heart. She does not have any more love to give to keep us healthy. We have to clean up.
thanks tiger..
A truth spoken but one we prefer to to be deaf, blind and dumb to. Good verse.
thanks rekha..
tq j for liking..
Interesting. God created man to tend and care for His creation. We haven’t always done a very good job!
http://www.benjity.wordpress.com
yes abby.. i can agree on this one.. 🙂
It is truly the cry of this modern day. Thank you for this clarion call.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/09/06/the-song-that-runs-through-me/
thanks JP for your comments and liking it..
Yes, am smiling for better or worse … what else can one helpless soul do? 🙂
Loved it! Timely and rhythmical … Well done! 😀
thanks elyas for your comment and for liking it!
Yes indeed, accurate, articulate … now get out there and teach the world. Very good poem!
hahah thanks old raven.. i can only teach from my blog!
Deep…. Great write !
tq mr watson for liking and for your comment..
Really good poem and all too accurate.
hey thanks meg for coming by..
your poem is the inconvenient truth in 8 short yet bittersweet lines..
haha inconvenient truth tiger? lol.. thanks for your comment..