first song

you are the first song

whose melody I hear

and the first joy

that peeks through

my window pane

gently nudging me up

from slumber

to a promising tomorrow..





24 responses to “first song

  1. The first song that gently nudges and peeks through my window pane, first joy, to a promising tomorrow–I like this poem very much–it resonates within. It has a gentle spiritual feel to it, a quiet gladness to be alive. Thanks for sharing.

  2. beautiful.

    well delivered sweetness.


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    Happy Saturday.


    a poem will do as well.

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