first song Posted by fiveloaf on May 27, 2011 you are the first song whose melody I hear and the first joy that peeks through my window pane gently nudging me up from slumber to a promising tomorrow.. . . . Advertisements Like this:Like Loading... Related
The first song that gently nudges and peeks through my window pane, first joy, to a promising tomorrow–I like this poem very much–it resonates within. It has a gentle spiritual feel to it, a quiet gladness to be alive. Thanks for sharing. Reply
beautiful. well delivered sweetness. Greetings: How are you? Check out our short story slam today, We love creativity, your contribution is invaulable to us. Cheers. Happy Saturday. xoxox a poem will do as well. Reply
in time my friend and thank you for the comment and invitation to participate in your meme.. i am on sabbatical for awhile.. Reply
Pretty much restating the praise that’s already here: really simple and sweet as a result! Great poem Reply
Lovely and so visual and has a visceral quality that says so much in so few words. “…joy that peeks into my window pane…” I like this. Namaste……….cj Reply
What a lovely piece! It’s very sweet 🙂 I love it!
thanks tekia
The first song that gently nudges and peeks through my window pane, first joy, to a promising tomorrow–I like this poem very much–it resonates within. It has a gentle spiritual feel to it, a quiet gladness to be alive. Thanks for sharing.
thanks dan
Charming and sweet. xoxo
tq gayle
Such an uplifting poem Kris, very nicely done.
I wonder what the tune is
haha thanks rich..
Kris,
I love this poem. Music is so important to my day, every day too!
Best wishes, Eileen
tq eileen..
beautiful.
well delivered sweetness.
Greetings:
How are you?
Check out our short story slam today,
We love creativity, your contribution is invaulable to us.
Cheers.
Happy Saturday.
xoxox
a poem will do as well.
in time my friend and thank you for the comment and invitation to participate in your meme.. i am on sabbatical for awhile..
lovely and simply said. thank you
tq geezer..
Lovely poem, have a nice sabbatical 🙂
tq ina- sabbatical from potluck for awhile haha!
Short, sweet, and lovely.
thanks mag..
Pretty much restating the praise that’s already here: really simple and sweet as a result! Great poem
thank you thoughts.. i am on sabbatical..
Lovely and so visual and has a visceral quality that says so much in so few words. “…joy that peeks into my window pane…” I like this.
Namaste……….cj
tq cj
…nice one….
Tq ivy