18 responses to “my perfect wife

  1. Sleeping alone fills the night with questions to say,
    Perhaps to be answered during the day,
    How can the future be so right,
    IF the perfect wife sleeps alone at night?

  2. I get the feeling the speaker is watching the things his perfect wife is doing because he is no longer living and she is keeping his memory alive. Great piece fiveloaf!

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