if you go Posted by fiveloaf on May 25, 2011 if you go I will choke not only on one tear but umpteen streams of memories that silts the only vision I know.. . . . Advertisements Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
umpteen streams of memories I really wonder where you get all these inspirations to write a wonderful line like this. Reply
How deeply you care is shown by umpteen memories and choking on one tear. That one word “if” is a dam holding back everything that could be lost. Excellent write. Reply
I love the “silts the only vision I know” very nicely done. you have a way with keeping it simple and to the point. Reply
Well fiveloaf- Its been a while since ive visited _ I have to say I love how short and to the point it is – keep up the great work! Reply
thanks alex- i am on sabbatical from potluck and thursday poetry for a while but thanks for coming by.. Reply
I really wonder where you get all these inspirations to write a wonderful line like this.
thanks midnight- when we are affected by what we feel, words chooses its own language..
Simply beautiful. Love the last few lines.
tq tekia
How deeply you care is shown by umpteen memories and choking on one tear. That one word “if” is a dam holding back everything that could be lost. Excellent write.
thanks dan..
Very poignant!
tq suzanne
Your deep love is so clearly shown.
thanks bodhi
I love the “silts the only vision I know” very nicely done. you have a way with keeping it simple and to the point.
thanks geezer..
Well fiveloaf- Its been a while since ive visited _ I have to say I love how short and to the point it is – keep up the great work!
thanks alex- i am on sabbatical from potluck and thursday poetry for a while but thanks for coming by..