a vision
a dream
a dawn of a new flight
firmament of past
now clears
.
.
.
I awoke
to the daut
of sparrows wing
blushing
my skin
.
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.
I stood
I lunge
I propelled
imitating the bird
I leapt in vain
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.
.
.
a vision
a dream
a dawn of a new flight
on sparrows wing
you lifted me..
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fiveloaf 
a beautiful romantic thought of a bird in flight. love gives us wings, it propells us into happiness. great poem, loaf 😉 xx
thanks glitter..
Poems are the wings that lift people up and allow them to fly. Thanks for sharing and inspiring. Now give them the vision of an eagle to see how beautiful the world is.
thanks dan..
Such an uplifting feel to this one fiveloaf! I like 🙂 Love the ending!
tq tekia
There she is again–lifting you up. “She” often shows up in your romantic poems. Very sweet.
thanks bodhi
Kris,
‘Have wings, will fly’!!! The sky is your oyster……
A delighful piece of writing.
Best wishes, to you Kris,
Eileen 🙂
tq eileen
Lovely and romantic 🙂
tq ina..
So beautifully romantic…
tq eclipse..
Inspiring and hopeful .. liked the read 🙂
thanks lady
awww ❤
tq anum
superb!!! 😀 😀 i love it =)
thanks harshi
Stunning words here Fiveloaf! I especially loved these words: “sparrows wing blushing my skin” – wow! Love it! xx
thanks blossom
stunning..
keep it up.
🙂
thanks ji..
Love this..
thanks jennirey
Beautiful poem. There’s lightness and surrender, especially on the last stanza. 🙂
thank you kat..
Awww.. that’s so beautiful.. and sweetly romantic, Kris… lovely!!
thanks kavi..
Fantastic kris, like the bird swooping in for the kill
thanks rich..
Beautiful reference to your Lord and how you give it all over to Him….
thanks laurie..
Hi Fiveloaf – just to let you know, I’ve put a link to your blog on my page called “My Blogging Friends” 😀
Hope you’re having a good weekend,
Chloe xx
no prob blossom.. shall add you too..
Hi Kris (fiveloaf) lovely poem!
tq ina.. not been writing for awhile haha!
Let me be with you.
? thanks midnight..