Lovely choice of words, short but sweet, powerful, meaningful; really enjoy the manner in which you construct your poems. Thanks and have a great week of creating.
I love that this actually makes me think of the change of seasons to fall. We were camping last weekend and the summer wind brought through a cold front and we woke to a doe in the misty meadow across from our tent. Wonderful capture!
tq jesse, terri, glitter, chloe, sophiastique, christopher raley, julian javier, roughwater john, kshawn edgar, dakshi, meiro, iris, belladonna23, seabell, david(1 mere mortal), papo, sarah johnston, swan rose and hema for liking this..
Congratulations, fiveloaf, for getting the Perfect Poet Award. Your poems are absolutely great!
you are on the list next week dan haha! no thanks to me! but really you deserve it! its a feat to write long poems lest to construct it!
Congratulations Kris…your poetry is very, very good and we thank you for sharing. Best wishes in your writing!!! Be Happy!
thanks john!
congrats !
Here’s the lady [award] for you : http://ladynimue.wordpress.com/2011/04/09/creative-one/
you gave me an ward? thanks lady.. must check it out! if it doesnt look good i reject haha!
Lovely poem lovely verse,,,,always a delight to read your work, of course congratulations you are indeed a perfect poet.
we both it seems have summer love on our minds.
joanny
did you too joanny? gee! 🙂
light and breezy =)
thanks lucy..
lovely imagery…I long for summer winds…
thanks rmp
the imagery is great.to know the cause of my absence , welcome to my blog
hey my friend wordwand! haha! WELCOME BACK!
loving it. totally. “the mountain is ours” 🙂 x
tq glit..
“^o^” “^o^”
a nice moment, thank you for this.
thanks bfg
oh, to taste the summer mist and own the mountain! Beautiful…
tq laurie..
The world is at your poetic feet.
thanks boo..
….so beautifully weaved…
tq eclipse
sweet taste on my lips … always such taste here 🙂
tq broken
a deer in the mist. beautiful
Iris
tq iris..
Very sensual. And congrats on your award!
tq danielle..
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very nice! and congratulations … well deserved!
thanks becca..
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Such beauty in such few words. Thanks for sharing! xx
tq chloe..
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Lovely choice of words, short but sweet, powerful, meaningful; really enjoy the manner in which you construct your poems. Thanks and have a great week of creating.
thanks john.. you too!
lovely words flow.
thanks meiro
beautiful….
thanks chimnese
Thank you for stopping by. Love your blog…
no problem and tq debra..
“the mountain is ours”… love it
tq robin..
‘you are like
a deer in the mist’… haha! nice 🙂
hey thanks mag..
oh good one!
i so love this part in particular:
“you are like a deer in the mist
sweet taste on my lips”
thanks again..
thanks bro..
Awesome images. You say so much in a few lines. Well done, my friend.
thanks aurora
tq terri for liking..
very nice. The last line comes as a surprise, and a good one
tq manic..
You have got so many appreciations..It would be little less if I say one..any how.. you write too good.. Thank you for share
you flatter me my friend.. 🙂 tq.
To share a mountain with wildlife is exactly what nature intended. Lovely, gentle, and well deserved perfect poet award, too.
tq daydreamer..
Wonderful writing. Very nice!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/
tq charles..
Love the last line. Great stuff
tq jack.. 🙂
A lovely reminder of the natural beauty of summer..
tq just..
I love that this actually makes me think of the change of seasons to fall. We were camping last weekend and the summer wind brought through a cold front and we woke to a doe in the misty meadow across from our tent. Wonderful capture!
tq jaymie..
tq sherrie for liking..
Great description … Figures of speech echoes):
tq welkinsiskin
Excellent!
tq becky 🙂
This is lovely – etheral
thanks a million jo.. nice word to describe it!
Good Job. Short,Simple and Sweet.
tq ankoku..
Excellent poem – a quick snatch of joy and beauty
tq dc..
love it, apt and dreamy imagery with the last line …in place.
tq morning..
you did a wonderful job on this short simple and very sweet
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/27/the-island-breeze/
tq sarah..
I hope it’s mine too. Really nice!
tq seabell.. it is for all..
profound expression of summer…an amazing poem.
thanks david..
tq jesse, terri, glitter, chloe, sophiastique, christopher raley, julian javier, roughwater john, kshawn edgar, dakshi, meiro, iris, belladonna23, seabell, david(1 mere mortal), papo, sarah johnston, swan rose and hema for liking this..
lovely romantic image.
tq mair..
Ah…makes me sigh and day dream…
haha really rekha? tq for your comment..
a short sweet snapshot of a moment
tq the oldstrong..
Lovely mountain breeze. Mountains are so spiritual aren’t they when you can just look and listen.
yea tiger, being a tiger you are you should know better haha! (jokin..) tq for your comment my friend..
i really liked this. but i must say, the background image is quite distracting.
hahaha ok- just focus on the poem ya? thanks gomagoti..
Ahh interesting read mate… and congrats on the award!
tq manoj and which award?
Powerful imagery, great verse.
The Lonely Recluse.
tq the lonely recluse..
tq delphine for liking..