we hear
eastern songs
ringing in our heart
every time
we are close
.
we hear our spirit
soaring
to the beat of
eastern drums
of our ancestors
.
and paced ourselves
to its crescendo
peaking with the flow
till our eastern veins
equate our touch..
.
.
.
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You sure know how to write a poem to let it flow. Very impressive.
thanks lisa
beautiful songs for my coffee this morning!
thanks blaga..
Relaxing poem… help me to relax… 🙂 *thumbs up*
thanks krislin
Great flow Kris! “Till our eastern veins equate our touch,” very, very poetic, expressive, metaphoric, and DEEP! Love it….
tq john..
I have to agree with John. That is an awesome line! I loved this piece. ‘Breath taking’ is what I thought after reading this. It’s such a tender and intimate piece. Love it 🙂
thanks tekia
sweet and passionate….
tq laurie
eastern / equate sound beautiful together.
lovely words here
thanks marit
A beautiful song of connecting on many levels.
thanks gayle
Eastern music is amazing.
Great poem to appreciate it
thanks richard..
Listening and connecting to eastern songs, your message is tender and romantic. Very nicely done!
thanks dan- decided to nominate you for wk42 perfect poet award..
How lovely! I can hear it. An eastern frame of mind.
thanks cloaked.. there’s another teri here- dont wanna get confused..
i like the looking back into the past to realise that so many things can influence the mind 🙂 xx
thanks glit..
Beautiful words here 😀 xx
thanks chloe..