I dream a dream
untainted by the fouls
of man
that I could camel in the heat
without being tormented
by man
nor scorned at seeking refuge
under the olive tree
by man
.
I dream I knelt
and pray for the breath
of God
to fluff me away
from the pharaohs’ grip
by God
and away from the pyramids
which held no grain
of God
.
and let go completely..
.
.
.
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Anything connected to pharaoh’s and pyramids is divine by my standards … and so does your poem here goes that way! Keep dreaming! Lovely Kris!
yea- keep dreaming haha!
I like this one Kris, so much depth and metaphoric imagery! So much talent and skill with the written word. Beautiful. John
tq john..
Very powerful!
lol..
Deep Bro. I could relate to this thought.
Bless!
hey thanks buddy!
U dream-(formulate),
U hope-(looking toward tomorrow),
U pray-(in conversation with the only one that may)
And discovered an ancient anointing.
yea and thanks sam..
Like it. It steals up on you – always a mark of a good poem, in my book.
thanks david..
Moving, awesome visually and great resonance.
thanks lisa..
The longing for freedom from the grip of oppression, great depiction here! I enjoyed my read very much, as always. Nice work!
i accept your interpretation seer haha!
Very powerful and yet tender at the same time. It took me right back to that time of the pharaohs as I read it.
hoho and you will look good in those arabian robes gayle haha!
Ha ha! Very funny!
lol.. i think thats a flatter- at least from me..
You’re right–I should have thanked you… 🙂
Thank you!
Another great post. Thanks for sharing this. Spending time sitting down to writing short stories and poems is something I truly enjoy in life. I enjoy reading your blog very much.
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hey thanks easy- will visit yours soon.. and thanks for coming by..
The quest for freedom is powerful, a mind set reaching into the divine world. Your poem yearns for freedom and takes steps away from Pharaoh’s grip, seeking protection from God. Well written and beautiful.
best interpreter of them all dan! huwee!
Powerful poem…loved the flow
tq uma and what style is this?
nice! never read a piece that religious in your work and i like 🙂 x
thanks glitter.. its not meant to be religious..
What a pharaoh’s tent…. I always find it mystical and kind of lost to use any words to nail it… You ace it.. 🙂
Interesting write, I have to say.. 🙂
thanks you sounded like the american idol judge haha!
Sounds so mystical. Love it. : )
thanks thingy
such peace in “and let go completely”…. what a nice dream you had…I’ll bet you can’t wait to sleep again!
haha thanks laurie..
Hello Kris,
I do like this poem very much indeed. One of your best!
It is very spiritual, with a touch of mystery…..
Best wishes, Eileen
thanks eileen- have not been to yours- will come by soon!