the fortress of Men
no longer enclave my soul
for I have given it to God
.
God not Men
.
the enemies of Men
no longer shield the gates
for I enter through God
.
God not Men
.
God not Vatican
.
God not Men
.
.
.
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the fortress of Men
no longer enclave my soul
for I have given it to God
.
God not Men
.
the enemies of Men
no longer shield the gates
for I enter through God
.
God not Men
.
God not Vatican
.
God not Men
.
.
.
Your choice is wise…I enjoy the brevity. You are a good poet, and, I like you page. Thanks for posting.
wow john- and what a flatter.. thanks!
So have I 🙂 A short and wonderful piece fiveloaf!
so have you? well well haha! thanks tekia..
When you no longer worry about keeping your fortress walls up you have freedom. Excellent poem.
you are 100% absolutely right dan..
I think you made a wise choice here, Kris! 🙂
tq gayle..
God not Vatican.
Lol, i like hearing that,
I enjoyed this poem Kris
haha thanks rich!
As usual “U Rock!”
thanks sam..
I think this is great. It sets out a (your?) stall in a particularly contemporary way, half literay, half diagramatic. I think it has possibilities.
haha! thanks david for scutinizing my style?
Very powerful piece, and I feel the very depths of what you express into the source of all that is.
So very happy to be stopping by. Have not been here in a while.
Wishing you well.
Love and peace
hi ana! yea- have not been hearing from you for awhile,,, been busy i guess? tq for your comment..
http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/poetry-month-clambake-lets-have-some-fun/
hope tosee you soon!
Luna
eh? you started a meme luna? must be.. wait i go check it out..
It’s hard to put any trust in mankind at the moment when you look around and see all of the wars, fighting, protests etc xx
🙂 agree totally..
Agree with Chloe here, with all that goes around, with the choices few men made, how do you keep on trust them? Difficult!
haha thanks blag..
Well penned and played!
thanks honeyhaiku..
“for I enter through God”…. the only way to go…. and such a beautiful piece this is!
thanks heartspell..
Very strong..God is within, whether we know it or not..the seperation is in our minds…
you got a point lyn..
Cool poem…simply stated and with conviction. Nice 🙂
thanks panda
My exposition on faith is here: http://cloakedmonk.com/2009/05/21/windows/
I agree with what you have said. God is the primary source. I have a priest – friend – professor at school who is awesome. Whenever he wanted to teach us something important that might not be Vatican-approved, he would shut the classroom door and say, “if you repeat this outside of the classroom, I will deny it!!” (he said tongue in cheek).
tq terri..