I
I am
I am a
I am a nobody
I am a nobody wanting
I am a nobody wanting to
I am a nobody wanting to be
I am a nobody wanting to be somebody
I am a nobody wanting to be somebody in
I am a nobody wanting to be somebody in your
I am a nobody wanting to be somebody in your life
III
III
III
cos I found hope with you
I found hope with you
found hope with you
hope with you
with you
you
.
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fiveloaf 
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creative format
thanks sam
Happiness would be greater if the “nobody” already knew he was a somebody…
Very creative, Kris. I like this.
this is called an adjective poem..
Nobody considered himself much until he came to the conclusion he wanted to be somebody. Now he has hope and it makes all the difference in the world.
thanks dan
it’s all about timing, you know.
“^o^” “^o^”
a creative revealing. Thanks!
haha
what a perfect tree shape,
you are a nobody wanting to be in your life..wow.
fabulous..
come to potluck now, we miss your absence.
🙂
hahaha thanks..
I like this form .. always enforcing the idea till you grasp it …
thank you lady..
hmm. This is very sad to me. “Nobody” has to figure out who “he” or “she” and love himself as someone before he can offer up a relationship. Thought provoking, again.
thanks margaret..
Nice shape poem. I like the anticipation you built from line to line.
thanks gazing
Finding hope makes you feel like somebody because you are not alone…. And the tree grows tall and strong nourished by the seed of hope.
🙂
Don’t we all feel like this? Nice poem
thanks wbw..
Always impressed by your blilliance!
🙂 thanks lyn
Beautiful and simple words in an awesome form! Very cool.
thanks chloe..
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Lovely tree shaped poem. I want it for Christmas! 🙂
haha you can have it ina… 🙂