Piss in the pot
Please aim and hold
Please aim it in the pot
At nine, I was told
.
So aim I did, a putting shot
The wind it blew too bold
I wince and jerk, it bent then jolt
Nine days scold..
.
.
.
Piss in the pot
Please aim and hold
Please aim it in the pot
At nine, I was told
.
So aim I did, a putting shot
The wind it blew too bold
I wince and jerk, it bent then jolt
Nine days scold..
.
.
.
Just can’t please anybody some days.
yea dan..
Oh, man–I think you’ve outdone yourself on this one! Haha! Nine days is a long time to be scolded… 😦
did i? haha..thanks gayle..
A rhyme with a funny moral —sort of like “spitting in the wind.”
warm wishes
joanny
thanks joanny..
Sometime we can’t make anyone happy …
But your poems do it, Kris.
Poem on …
thanks jamie.. meant to be..
Ha ha, nice one kris.
For the record i dont like pease pudding though. lol
haha no worries richard.. 🙂
Good one, Kris. 9 days scolded, huh? Harsh. LOL
🙂
hahaha !!!
i cnt stop laughing !!!
thanks lady..
LOL. I’m not going to forget that title.
thanks thingy
Don’t forget to put the lid down!! Funny, clever!!!
tq lyn..
Nice one. Enjoyed it.
thanks anthony..
That’s different! I like it, funny. Certainly a creative take!
tq lisa..
That was witty!
thanks madeline..
LOL! Cute poem.
🙂 haha!
I’m rolling on the floor with laughter and sure hope your aim didn’t end there.
thanks krm for coming by..
Bwaahaahaa! As a mom of a boy…oh my!
tq teri..
hahaha! 9 days scold? pissing in the wind? nice one! fivey! XD love it!
thanks julian..
Well done 🙂
well done? oops! ok thanks..
ahaha! brilliantly funny! 🙂
tq bended..
haha
thanks robin- glad it makes all my readers smile!
hahaha, very cute! I love this, great job!
thanks paulo
First time I’ve laughed out loud to a poem! Great, thanks for sharing 🙂
thanks mypastmademe..
I went ahead and posted results for week one a few hours early.
🙂
http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/poetry-month-clambake-lets-have-some-fun/
Luna
great luna!