images
of pain
keep recurring
.
bandages
from wounds
keep opening
.
a youth
of promise
went crumbling
.
I found
my dreams
dissipating
.
a lens
so tiny
keep flashing
.
a trauma
a weeping
a stealing..
.
no friends
no greeting
all lashing
.
my heart
once boisterous
went crumbling..
.
.
.
fiveloaf 
this so sadly dramatic! sometimes I feel exactly the same…
you do? ok.. thanks mag..
“^o^” “^o^”~~~~ 🙂
Trauma either on our mental or physical can really take it’s toll. So tragic this.
yea..
sigh ! seem so similar ,,
?
but i had friends .. so guess it was bearable ..
oh ok!
Aww, what a sad and somewhat tragic poem. I can completely relate to it though, I know how that crumbling feeling feels. Beautiful poem!
thank you my friend..
Feeling alone in the world with uncaring people around you is disheartening. A sad poem but well written.
thanks dan..
Powerful tragic and common which it should not be — it should be something we rarely experience in ones lifetime in ourselves or others.
as always, your writings are insightful , stirring, profound.
joanny
tq joanny..
A tragic poem but exceptionally written
tq richard..
this is a very powerful poem…
Loved your words 🙂
tq sumit..
crystal clear description. You painted it with perfection.
tq trish..
I sensed fear in your poem. It’s a well-written piece. Good job. 🙂
thanks katherine..
sad eloquent poem
😦 yea..
That crumbled heart is a gift to others in your writing… that is one silver lining in those rain clouds… such sorrow in this one… blessings of peace in your heart, my friend.
your perception lends consolation to the ears of the aching.. thanks heartspell..
Love the imagery on this one “Trauma.” Your site is encouraging to others and you are kind with your words on my post. Wishing you continued success with your passion of poetry. Please keep sharing.
thanks john..
sad, hope all is well.
a powerful piece, well done.
tq morning..
Well, you wrote about my life.
i guess it is coincidental.. thanks for coming by halfway..
excellent.
🙂
tq ji..
powerful emotions aptly conveyed.
a masterful delivery.
join us today, have fun!
thks
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