perhaps you should know
that I love you more than
a lifetime
of seeing each other
of coping with each other
and learning from each other
.
it really took me a lifetime to find you
and somehow
I just know that
it will take me a lifetime
to get over you
.
.
if you go..
.
.
.
awww… finders are keepers! But if they must leave, then just be happy for them.. a lifetime ain’t all that long after all…
Best wishes!!
But I kinda agree with your sentiment here, FL.. letting go ain’t that easy.. 😦
yea..
🙂 thanks kavi..
For some, love cuts deep,
leaving ages to weep,
As the heart begins to heal,
there’s another love so real,
Deep, rich, and sublime,
Existing in that same lifetime.
Poem on.
thanks dan..
Fiveloaf, You fascinate me with how much emotion you can put in so few words.
thank you sam..
Fabulous.
Love it!
thanks shea..
What an emotional piece, beautifully expressed. I like the simplicity.
thank you debi..
They can be hard to find but you know when you have a keeper. So much said in so few words. Beautiful.
~ C
thanks cheryl..
Written by who truly feels love I think. Nicely done, fiveloaf.
thanks jamie..
this is a heartfelt piece fiveloaf. I especially liked the second part- “it really took me a lifetime to find you….it will take me a lifetime to get over you if you go”- nice touch. Bravo!
thank you tekia..
Nice Thoughts ..
Take a look on mine ..
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/12/10/love-is/
sure ashzone.. 🙂 thank you for your comment
“(tears)
.
.
. ”
that’s jokes. love it 😉 xx
haha!
Pretty; an apt expression of love and hurt.
…(tears)? That made me laugh 🙂
Love you lots,
~Bev
thanks beth haha!
fiveloaf,
1. thanks, returning your visit
2. reading your offering is an education. very clever use of simple words but profound and deep in meaning. Clearly a balance of affections to despair. Excellent!
thank you kay–
wow.
Amazing!
thanks filingahole..
came back to read again…
so good.
no worries evelyn..
You do have the gift of expression Fiveloaf…Excellent job telling the feeling in the words. Have a merry Christmas man!
thanks bro..
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sure ji..
how true. it makes one wonder, is it truly better to have loved and lost rather then have never loved at all?
you can say so andrea..
i loved this… tears.
thank you robin..
Words expressed so beautifully. This one really stirs the emotions xx
🙂 thanks chloe..