I orchestrated
a wily sausage symphony
overturing with baton in hand
flicking and mimicking
the conductor
with stark passion
at times salivating to
smother the heatwave
whilst you lay back
culminating candidly
over the extended version
of my hard copy
feeling the crescendo
towards the finale
shuddering uncontrollably
over my masterly direction
till peace
finally gave you in..
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fiveloaf 
oopsssss!
oops?
Kris,
A rather passionate read…..
Very lively….
Eileen
tq eileen..
hmmm… i’d be a liar if i said this wasn’t pornographic at all.
still, tres bien 😉
xx
thanks glittering
I agree, passionate writing my friend. I loved it 🙂
haha 🙂
what an artistically graphic poem- skillfully crafted! 😀 well done, fiveloaf! only a master poet like you can get away with this. *clap*clap*
i also wanna let you know i have tags and awards for you. if you find the tags too long, you can just grab the awards. they are all for you. 🙂
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tq bing- master poet? amanda says i am the king of romance. haha! anyway, tq for the awards bing- shall try to allocate them all in..
I enjoyed visiting your blog and reading your work.
You truly have a gift with words
best,
Angela
http://angelacohan321.wordpress.com
that is very nice of you to say- 🙂 thanks and feel free to browse..
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art/painting,
humor,
cooking,
short stories
tq ji..
naughty and amusing. I like it.
tq carolina
Love this poem, Fiveloaf. Totally original. No cliche (boy the amount of cliche I wade through daily lol)
Warmest Salad
Luke
thanks luke..
Quite passionate!
Pamela
tq pamela..
A bit of sizzle and a lot of fun. Well done!
haha! it really sizzles .. thanks alot jamie..
Wonderfully articulate and anmusing version of “hide the sausage!” Rare mastery of the medium and the situation! 🙂
tq stafford
with sugar in my bowl…Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. Hope your week goes well.
same to you john..