your tongue
lit up my night
and opened up sensations
of glorious sweet
.
I twitched
and moaned and growled
with your continual relish
of my torso
.
with you
I went on a night safari
a wandering ritual
that bound our intimacy
.
changing me
into a nocturnal animal
whilst cradling a wanting
of your cheekiness..
.
.
.
Now I am officially naming you the King of Romance…no if’s or but’s…I soooo loved the last stanza, there was a wild passion in your words that kept me glued to the screen…and took me back on night safari’s back in Africa!! Well done 🙂 Hugs xx
omg- king of romance? really? haha..
Intense. You have expanded the boundaries of things addressed by most. I like the physicality and intimacy of it. – bill
haha ok.. thanks bill..
This is exactly the kind of safari to travel in the dark of night; who needs sleep, anyway? The journey appeared to be very refreshing! Lovely words…. 🙂 heartspell
haha- really?
ohhhhhhhh it is really hot in here!!! way to go, fiveloaf!
haha you are so funny bing!
No need for adult films when poets write words like this or play symphonies with sausages – the reader offers a blank mental screen upon which this poet paints and teases.
? tq broken..
Sorry, I don’t know what tq stands for, but I understand the question mark. They taught question marks when I went to school, way back in the middle ages. I didn’t mean to be so obtuse in my response to your poem. I was responding to both this poem and the previous sausage-waving lover. As one of your readers said, there aren’t any cliche’s in your work – it’s original. I felt like I was watching a poetry film – an adult film (won’t say porn, because that’s not what I meant). Intense close-ups on someone’s private sexual life with their lover – like a magnifying glass held 2″ away, and enough left to the imagination to include the reader’s mind. That’s what I was trying to say. This piece was more tender than the last one, which was kind of fun and kinky.
🙂
I like it. 🙂
Nicely wrought. Passion appears to be the subject of September … 🙂
Happy potluck!
same to you too jamie!
What a beautiful thing you have shown us. Thank you.
tq shane.. and welcome to my humble blog..
I did not plan on being aroused and picturing some anonymous heated passion in the middle of the afternoon.
Of course, I didn’t plan on coming across this post either.
Fine work.
haha thanks posky..
love it!
thank you jingle..
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-natures-elements-air.html
how is everything, friend?
It is Monday again, I sincerely invite you to join us for a Monday Poetry Potluck party, bring in 1 to 3 poem treats to share!
You will have 60 hours enjoying the fun.
Hurry up, the more you share, the happier we are.
Hope to see you in our party….Last time to link in is Wednesday, 8am!
oops haha! well well.. ok here i come!