perennial playbacks

Posted by fiveloaf on

I thought about you

at the most unlikely moment

at the most unlikely places

in the most precarious of situation

I thought about you

effortlessly

as my heart beats frantically

with those perennial playbacks

subtly sending me reminders

that I am finally home..

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30 responses to “perennial playbacks”

  4. This, I really felt! That sense of breathlessness, and all one can think of, is them! And that’s when you know!

    I really liked this, FL… it rang very very true!!!

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  8. “perennial playbacks” … great phrase. The alliteration is very nice in this. I also like that there are many clues about the situation and circumstance and yet not nearly enough to make a narrative without the reader’s own imagination. Thank you for sharing this.

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  13. “I thought about you
    effortlessly
    as my heart beats frantically”
    …love those lines. Can’t help thinking of another, could be amazing or tormenting—think positive given the overall context. Great work.

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