I thought about you
at the most unlikely moment
at the most unlikely places
in the most precarious of situation
I thought about you
effortlessly
as my heart beats frantically
with those perennial playbacks
subtly sending me reminders
that I am finally home..
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awww. love this.
love love love!
” thought about you
in the most unlikely moment
in the most unlikely places”
when you love someone you just can’t stop thinking bout them 🙂 xx
thanks glitter
Nice. Brings back memories. Thanks. – bill
tq bill..
Nothing says it better than your poem…resonates my friend xx
tq buttercup!
This, I really felt! That sense of breathlessness, and all one can think of, is them! And that’s when you know!
I really liked this, FL… it rang very very true!!!
tq kavita.. cheers!
another divine poem.
you are forever praising me..
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Thanks for the contribution!
Happy Friday!
tq ji..
Home is where the heart (always) is….. lovely. 🙂 heartspell
thank you heartspell..
“perennial playbacks” … great phrase. The alliteration is very nice in this. I also like that there are many clues about the situation and circumstance and yet not nearly enough to make a narrative without the reader’s own imagination. Thank you for sharing this.
thank you yousei,,
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I’m tagging you with the Happy award.
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🙂 Heartspell
hey tq heartspell..
Aww this is very sweet.. love this, the tenderness just echoed in your choice of words.. 🙂
tq imagina..
kris,
Glad I found this piece of writing. Such sensitive and caring thoughts contained within your words. Beautiful!
Best wishes, Eileen
thank you eileen..
“I thought about you
effortlessly
as my heart beats frantically”
…love those lines. Can’t help thinking of another, could be amazing or tormenting—think positive given the overall context. Great work.
haha! are you suppose to think of another? 😉
i feel for this! makes me reminiscent. such a lovely, poignant poem 😀
thank you so much for this 😛
tq levity.. and welcome to my blog!
An old fashioned sense of romance to this one. Good job. Very nice.
tq jamie!