the sky cried

when I begged of you

to stop

you ignored  my plea

and carried on nailing

you should have

.

the sky cried

when it saw me hung

and drenched

frailly calling  on you

not to forsake us

.

but you walked away

from the storm

clinging on tightly to

your cloak of ego

disregarding my plea

.

when I begged of you

to stop

you should have

and so I walked away

the sky cried..

.

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64 responses to “the sky cried

  1. Ack! painful ..
    All this crying makes me awkward and sad…
    This damned Ego!! The root cause of all misunderstandings..

    A cleverly and well-put poem.. Kudos..

  2. The sky shared that painful encounter.

    So nicely penned
    hope you join us for One Shot Wednesday
    can’t wait!!!!

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