you are
an emotional being
every inch of it
how I wish
that there is this
logical side of you
that helps you
to assess me
but
you are a total woman
and I am a total man
ironically
we complimented
and drew from each
others strength more
than we obfuscate
and that alone
is enough
to obliviate
the occasional mess..
.
fiveloaf 
this poem is really cool.
Your poems always flow well
thank you buddy!
hehehe… very beautiful !!
The last few lines are absolutely sweet and awesome!
An excellent tribute…
Thanks for sharing..
😉
What a wonderful tribute…so very cool:) Have a great week ahead 🙂
women oh women- so strangely alluring..
i love how the most stirking parts of your poem are also often the simplest ones.
“you are a total woman
and I am a total man”
tres effective 🙂
xx
who then is the total hero hehe?
very neat, love the way you wrap it up at the end.And the use of obfuscate and obliviate.
you like it? thanks jessica..
fiveloaf,
I have just read through Total Woman a few times. I like it very much for the love and honesty contained within the words.
Best wishes Eileen
hey thank you eileen and btw i just confirmed your friend request at facebook..
Reminds me of a great relationship that is worth the occasional mess b/c of the balancing of two very different individuals. Also, totally agree about the obliviate / obfuscate rhyme… awesome
hey dustus my good buddy- tq !
may it always stay that way.. .the differences complimenting
and the messes obliviated…well said. Heartspell
thanks 🙂
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??? thank you anyway buttercup!
tq ji..
perfect images..
it is? tq.
This is a good post for me to get introduced to you. I enjoyed it!
hey my buddy jrm! tq for dropping by- we’re gonna have a gud time haha
Nicely written! You’ve got some really tight lines that keep the flow of the poem. Well done!
-Weasel
thanks systematic..
awesome poem
tq marya..
awesome:) love this
and that alone
is enough
to obliviate
the occasional mess..
🙂
oh I can see so much clearer now that I actually looked up those O words how could I be so dim it was like I was under some sort of spell or something..well written as always a joy to read..me most people say I’m too logical but I just see it all either black or white..I write to improve my ability to imagine..have I said too much sorry I’m just a woman who talks way too much and now I have two more words I can use!
haha thanks ds!
great poem 🙂
it does justice in capturing a certain aspect of man – woman relationship 🙂
tq imagina..
a wonderful poem…and what i hope as well…that i can draw out my wifes strengths and survive every storm…smiles.
hey thanks brian!
hehe….the simplicity of this poem is what makes it so beautiful 🙂
thanks alethea..
you are absolutely right 🙂
thanks trish
“sigh”
? 🙂
right. sigh. what woman wouldn’t sigh over this?
haha you knew better!
but…if women were logical we wouldn’t be so passionate!
you are right again- 😉