total woman

you are

an emotional being

every inch of it

how I wish

that there is this

logical side of you

that helps you

to assess me

but

you are a total woman

and I am a total man

ironically

we complimented

and drew from each

others strength more

than we obfuscate

and that alone

is enough

to obliviate

the occasional mess..

.

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46 responses to “total woman

  1. Reminds me of a great relationship that is worth the occasional mess b/c of the balancing of two very different individuals. Also, totally agree about the obliviate / obfuscate rhyme… awesome

  2. Nicely written! You’ve got some really tight lines that keep the flow of the poem. Well done!

    -Weasel

  3. oh I can see so much clearer now that I actually looked up those O words how could I be so dim it was like I was under some sort of spell or something..well written as always a joy to read..me most people say I’m too logical but I just see it all either black or white..I write to improve my ability to imagine..have I said too much sorry I’m just a woman who talks way too much and now I have two more words I can use!

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