it is hard when
you are not around
i really depended on
you to keep me awake
and all our hopes alive
by staying truthful
and behaving truthful
it is that simple to
keep my anxiousness
at ease so long as that
in your hands
is always held tightly
and kept warm..
Love is so powerful that when you invest so much of yourself in a relationship, its draining not to have that person around. To symbolize your connection as a diamond was my favorite part. Really beautiful.
hey splash and welcome back- appreciate your comments..
What an unusual choice using a diamond — but so apropos. For a diamond is multifaceted- and if one is fortunate enough will get one without many flaws… it can also be an extremely hard, highly refractive crystalline. Allowing one to see into the soul of the diamond, but with rose colored glasses on.
Interesting ….. a rare beauty a rare soul.
What vivid imagery you painted using the diamond!! Your work is always so touching and leaves me speechless. Thank you x
I have found you!
Diamond, contains great thoughts of love and the value that have place upon your relationship.
hi eileen! wow! welcome to my blog- tq…
sweet feelings revealed here,
best wishes for your day!
ya haha! very seldom of me..
Considering the title, that was a very unexpected poem! 🙂
And so lovely! Got some mushy fuzzy feelings inside of me on reading those last few lines..
A very warm poem…
Thanks for sharing…
An excellent take on the prompt and a very enjoyable read!
hey systematic- thanks for coming by..
A diamond of a heart for sure…Heartspell
we really know what is important to us when it is lost… nice poem
thanks jincy for dropping by.. feel free to browse!
it’s amazing how you used “diamond” to describe that feeling.
Loved this one 🙂
That was a wonderful comment Joanny
thank you alethea..