no longer
do our petals drop
nor wilt
like before
.
no longer
does the rain
stayed on
till it muds
.
we have incarnated
in spirit
and fleshed
through the seasons
.
the flute
has carried
one petal
on its journey..
.
.
.
no longer
do our petals drop
nor wilt
like before
.
no longer
does the rain
stayed on
till it muds
.
we have incarnated
in spirit
and fleshed
through the seasons
.
the flute
has carried
one petal
on its journey..
.
.
.
Beautiful. Melodic. Simple images that carry the spirit and engage the mind. Thank you for this. – Bill
no prob rev..
beautiful flow.
😉
thanks jingle..
This is just beautifully expressed. I especially love the last two verses. Thanks for sharing. heartspell
hi heartspell! thank you for your thoughts..
You are so talented…Very touching and beautiful. ~ Hugs
and the same goes for your wonderful recipes and poems..
sweet yea? “^o^” “^o^”
Beautiful and full of grace.
tq suzanne
simply gorgeous, beautiful and fragrant like a petal. 🙂
hey thank you trish!
beautiful
plz check this link…nomination for pink award
http://hoiden.wordpress.com/awards/pink-award-from-kavita-n-jingle-thank-u-loads/
thank you hoiden for the award..
This one’s so melodious to the ear… I usually read the poem aloud in my.. and this one kinda flowed like a stream… trickled away… as tender as a fresh petal…
thank you kavita..
So beautiful…flows very well.
tq liz and welcome to my blog
A sweet fancy … I like it. Thank you.
thanks so much!