peaceful dove
on the palm
of my left hand
you placed
your heart
.
peaceful dove
you contorted
my right hand
to image the left
and on it
you planted
your soul
.
peaceful dove
as I closed my eyes
you opened up my mind
and rested in
your worries
.
in tranquility
your breath now
permeates my conscience
your sequential giving
changed me
there is speech
in this stillness
.
peaceful dove
like a yogi
I mused
at your inner beauty
in between silence..
.
.
.
fiveloaf 
lovely peaceful dove,
vivid words and cute images…
u style rocks!
🙂
fiveloaf
I read and read this one , each time I have a different encounter with self……love is divine is love is pure,
my self, my soul a union with another, a union with another soul, the divine.
You have such beautiful thoughts ….
from an incurable romantic,
Joanny
haha tq joanny- yea- you are incurable..
I love this…
“In tranquility
your breath now
permeates my conscience”
A beautiful song of love.
thanks suzanne..
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/07/11/happy-belated-birthday-plus-get-well-soon-wishes-4-five-friends/
please help visit 5 people,
wishing them Happy Belated Birthday or Get Well Soon.
Thank you in advance!
cheers!
huh? oic- ok!
peaceful dove ..like a yogi..I mused …just loved this..keep up the writing…you’re awesome!! Hugs x
tq buttercup- you too!
Imaginative and mind opening. Thanks – Bill
tq bill..
on the palm
of my left hand
you placed
your heart
Love that line, absolutely beautiful.
thanks suzi..
This is such a tranquil poem, very much communicating a state of being. Nicely done!
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
thanks mair..
thanks for the visits to 5 friends…
😉
🙂 no problem!
Beautiful poem indeed, 🙂
Loved it,
Peace,
Laz
thanks laz..
there is speech
in this stillness
my favorite lines… wonderful poem so composed in its flow and narration !
thank you spandhanaa
this is such a lovely poem. Bravo!
hey thanks tekia..
I like your style! Nice!
tq desiree..
Wonderful pace. I actually feel this sense of stillness as I read, like if the voice in my head gets too loud as I read the poem will shatter like glass.
haha really? take it as a compliment from you- thanks!
So beautiful and so full of love…thank you for sharing. You are on my blogroll. Heartspell
hi heartspell! and many thanks for dropping by..
With this, you emit signs of being out on a soul-searching expedition…
Some really meaningful lines in there…
“as I closed my eyes
you opened up my mind
and rested in
your worries”
This is a reminder that once in a while, we need to close our eyes to the outsides, and open up to ourselves on the inside… somehow, this is the best way to balance things out..
An excellent poem… thanks for sharing this, Kris..
you are welcome kavita..
I llike this one
hey buddy you do not have to emphasise it with so many “l’s” haha!
Powerful imagery and the layout works so well here.
thank you for coming by jessica and thanks for the comments..
Love the contemplation of nature in this poem—soothing in tone and wonderfully written.
thanks dustus
Happy to visit again after so long. Hope you’re doing well. Enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing it.
thanks yousei- nice of you to drop by..
Hi Fiveloaf. It’s been awhile, and thank you so much for the comment on my poem.
I’ve just read this poem after posting a new one on my blog – WOW! This is beautiful! It really speaks to me peacefully and I’m liking your style – we seem to be on a similar wave-length. Lol. 🙂
do we? ok! shall visit your posting..
wonderful picture. painted a perfect picture of peace.
thanks again..
Peaceful poem. Even the pacing and repitition supports the sense of peace … like someone slowing, gently stroking one’s head.
Very nice. Thanks.
thank you jamie- 🙂
Well, after you referenced your own “Yogi” poem after reading mine, I had to come read yours. A different take than mine and very nice. 🙂
🙂 thank you bodhi..
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/09/mountains-are-high/
take the awards after you are done,
for Poets Rally, 3 poems can be submitted….
also, vote your favorite poets after you finish your initial 18 commenting….
Thanks a lot!
have fun!
thanks ji..