bubblegum Posted by fiveloaf on July 7, 2010 you sucked all the sweetness out of me and then you spit me out.. . am I your bubblegum? . . . Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
that’s a good one — all chewed up. Love comes with pleasure and its companion is asleep on the bed — pain.. then they switch roles…
Very sad, and good poem,
nice imagery. I can see it now: chewed up, spit out, and probably stepped on. Nice poem.
Definitely solid. And fun. Someday I may find myself quoting you to somebody! -Bill
you are welcome bill..
a very deep thought…
I felt it came with a tad of innocence..
like that of a kids:)
tq spand for the compliment..
such intense use of imagery and words. A very powerful write!
Hah!! Too good! As thoughtful as ever… short and pierced right through!!!
I remember lashing out a similar dialog to a friend once (ofcourse that wasn’t anything serious).. and he had replied by calling me a drama queen 🙂
🙂 and did you? ooh wow! i am currently in denial that that ever was an intention inflicted on purpose cos it was never made known but i know i was good fun for a while and i do not want to assume the worse. if it really was meant to be done with the worse of intentions, i believe remorse would come sooner or later to that person cos i am cute and charming!
Yea… maybe I was in denial too … I still am not quite sure… I suppose one never likes admitting he/she was made a total fool of 🙂
tq ji- was a satisfying award in may for me and its high time others get it!
powerful use of an image everyone can relate to. awesome
amazing metaphor. this couldn’t be expressed better with any other words.
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! thanks samantha!
leaves me wondering who is gonna find it stuck to the bottom of their shoe!
haha thanks ds..
hope that you enjoy some,
this is certainly how I feel right about now–although sweetness probably isn’t a word that we ever be used to describe me.
you are a very concise and thorough person if i may say cos you have been combing all my past poems for the last few days. thank you whimsy and i am humbled..
I like these poems. A lot.
hey thaks alot whimsy..
potluck is open, if you have old poems to share, link in NOW,
you will benefit the best if you act and get in early.
Thanks for the participation!
Succinct and clever! Like it a lot!
tq naomi and welcome to my blog- feel free to browse..