not me
not mine
not yours
alone
it is ours to hold
realism in realm
help me move away
from the fervent that
make our crossings
difficult
I took the wrong road..
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fiveloaf 
I dislike so those wrong roads. You got to me with this one. It seemed so close to home.
Wonderfully written and emotionally impacting poetry, fiveloaf.
Peace to you!
Suzanne
tq suzanne- hurting someone that we love as we journey along can be very challenging especially at times when you yourself know that your intention is not like what they think it is.. and being emotionally charged can make us lose control…
three poetry awards,
4 general awards…
Enjoy the moment.
Thank you for the contribution on poetry..
tq ji..
i hate those crossroads… i always seem to pick the wrong one….lols…anyhow great poem:)
ic n we go hand in hand..
very moving and tender!
thks ds..
as usual , a lovely telegraphic style to pen a wonderful poem.
see mine
telegraphic? yea haha.
I like the way you twist the uses of words around, ‘fervent’, ‘realm,’ so that they mean what you want more than what they mean, just through sound. it’s something i’m always trying for and you do it beautifully
very observant love..