12 responses to “realism in realm

  1. I dislike so those wrong roads. You got to me with this one. It seemed so close to home.

    Wonderfully written and emotionally impacting poetry, fiveloaf.

    Peace to you!
    Suzanne

    • tq suzanne- hurting someone that we love as we journey along can be very challenging especially at times when you yourself know that your intention is not like what they think it is.. and being emotionally charged can make us lose control…

  2. I like the way you twist the uses of words around, ‘fervent’, ‘realm,’ so that they mean what you want more than what they mean, just through sound. it’s something i’m always trying for and you do it beautifully

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