castle of dream

just when

my castle of dream

crumbles

you hurried

to my side

to piece up the shatter

.

just when

my world

became uncertain

you remain

ever so close

to prop up my smile

.

you had given me

above all

a new castle to dream..

.

.

.

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10 responses to “castle of dream

  1. You really touch me with this one. I think being able to be that type of person most wonderful, but even more I’m moved that you recognize it. This is so beautiful!

    Peace,
    Suzanne

  2. Thank you for the vote for the “celebrate blogger of April on art or short stories award”, fiveloaf. I really appreciate that very much.

    Peace to you!
    Suzanne

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