in you
I have transformed
you have broken the chain
of silence
with the sound of nature
fluting inside my ears..
.
in you
I found peace
you have tranquilled
my innermost sanctum
by your breath
you gave me new life..
.
in you
I found love
a sight of endless eternity
a state of soothe
a craving of freshness
a want..
.
in you
I found happiness
at dawn you scattered
your dew at my feet
a scent most calming
purifying my thoughts..
.
in you
I found joy
you have affected me
with beauty most alluring
I delight in your presence
that I may continuously feel you..
.
in you
all my senses awaken
a change most longing
breaking new skin
I took charge
a metamorphosis..
.
.
.
fiveloaf 
A raptuous poem. Beautiful!
you flatter me really..
a beautiful thing…that metamorphosis…and your poem…
tq brian.. ^o^
Very awesome — I’ve only just figured out how to read your site, as at first I thought the snippets were all there was.
I love this poem — it really speaks to me!
tq young- for finding your way around.. feel free to come back anytime..
lovely love, lovely poem, lovely you.
tq ji for your support..
vote if not done so,
or take the award…
oh? haha thanks!
what a perfect beauty. very beautifully written. full of deep love. 🙂
hey thanks! takes a person like you to know the hidden messages..
I just love this! This was beautiful. Bravo!
tq tekia
Beautiful poem
tq aalooran
wow…..whoever you’ve written this for is very lucky!!!
Another beautiful poem 🙂
tq alethea..
Amazing poem, I love the power it has, and the energy it brings, so filled with links all being directed into a whole picture. It’s beautiful. 🙂
you are welcome ana- perhaps maybe you’d like “scented flowers” and “a tale from the sky”- give me your opinion- i’d love to hear from you..
well portrayed the dimensions of transformation 🙂 liked this !!
tq..
beautiful — the poem and my own metamorphosis 🙂
tq and welcome to my blog bended.. feel free to browse around
The flow as I read, deepen and flow smoothen as I read from one line to another..
Its that unseen power of changes, the willingness of love flowing that generates in this poem.. I enjoy this.. 🙂 Great write…
Here is mine for Monday Potluck and do take some time for it.. 🙂 Thanks… 🙂
http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/02/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpf109-that.html
thanks krislin..
Beautiful flow and an amazing ending.
thanks sam..
powerful and pretty!
thanks sina..
Beautiful. Yay for love.
tq cheryl
lovely thought 🙂
thanks ani..
Brilliant! I’d say more, but the poem speaks for itself really. I love it!
tq bward42
in you is a great poet 🙂
thanks bended
Peace, joy, love, happiness, and then you morphed. I think you covered everything in a well written poem. I really enjoyed it!
thanks dan..
An awesome write…well done.
tq david..
Your words captivated me with this one my friend.
tq my friend..
Remindsme of Sufi poetry. Beautifully done.
have never heard of sufi poetry before monk! maybe you could enlighten me?
loved the flow!
tq ab..
This is the type of love poem I like…it goes deeper than the first blush of romance, suggests endurance.
thanks liv..
I love this take on home. Secure in another’s arms.
thanks aleza..
beautiful…you conveyed the feeling of love so well…i liked the ending…in you all my senses awaken
a change most longing
breaking new skin
I took charge
a metamorphosis..
thanks rekha..
sweet.
super talented expressions.
Cheers.
A++
🙂
thanks ji..
A poem that speaks of a higher power in humble gratitude and wisdom coming from giving oneself fully to this life….this is a beautiful treasurechest of poetic sharing…
tq heartspell..
loving tribute
mmm? thanks kathe..
You’ve captured here, the essence of what just a few of us actually find. Nicely composed.
thanks kim..
What a beautiful, sensuous poem. Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2011/02/21/home/
thanks teresa
Love really does change people…you have quite the talent to express your love and adoration so well. I sure hope she saves all these beautiful poems you write to and about her! 😉
eh? thanks dragon..
That was lovely!
thanks madeline..
Nice write and a good read
thanks reggie..
This is beautiful “in you” like a transformation wished for and welcomed with open arms
thanks kodjo
Love it.
thank you tigerbrite..
so beautiful….serene…
thanks rashmi..
Beautiful. Whomever this is, keep them close, or you might lose your way.
i might lose my way?
loved this poem…its dark but it also has some hope in love in it..
here is my link:
http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/02/africa-my-home.html
thanks chimnese..
I love the “in yous.” There are many layers here. What an exploration.
thank you annell..
I can feel your unadulterated joy at loving.
tq irene… 🙂
What a tribute!!
🙂 🙂 🙂
Tranquilized..
very peaceful.. dedicated to.. who? 😉
Love xx
thanks olivia..
A lovely thank you to a special person in your life. I like the simplicity of the lines!
Thanks for visiting my poem earlier.
thanks jessica..
Beautiful, beautiful poem, Love this sentiment:
in you
I found peace
you have tranquilled
my innermost sanctum
P.S. I don’t know who’s bugging you about doing a haiku a day, but it isn’t me. I’m a rhyming gal. 🙂
haha must be sis (someone is special) i got mixed up.. no she didnt bug me- just ask me to join but i cannot.. and rightfully i thought i should let the person know since i was asked and invited to participate..
I like it — a lovely paean to the beauty of finding true love and the changes it brings.
thanks lizbeth..
fiveloaf, beautiful sentiments.
A truly lovely poem.
Pamela
thanks pam!
a scent most calming
purifying my thoughts…
this is exactly how your poetry is … Lovely Kris!
you flatter me blaga.. haha thanks!
It’s miraculous sometimes how we can be changed by a certain someone in our lives. Love this, Kris. xoxo
thanks gayle..
Beautiful!
thats how a relationship is meant to be!
a different way of putting this together, kudos on creativity!!! I enjoyed that! 🙂
can say so life..
Fantastic love song.
hey thanks..
it’s so great to be adored!
ya …
Divine …! becca
thanks becca
“tranquilled”
“state of soothe”
Wonderful words!
thanks michael..
beautiful is the only word i can use!! 😀
my fav poem from all ur work +)
thanks dancing..
Nice wordplay.Enjoyed the flow:)
tq vishwas
This is beautiful! Such rapture!!!! really sweetly expressed…
thanks life..