metamorphosis

in you

I have transformed

you have broken the chain

of silence

with the sound of nature

fluting inside my ears..

.

in you

I found peace

you have tranquilled

my innermost sanctum

by your breath

you gave me new life..

.

in you

I found love

a sight of endless eternity

a state of soothe

a craving of freshness

a want..

.

in you

I found happiness

at dawn you scattered

yourΒ dewΒ at my feet

a scent most calming

purifying my thoughts..

.

in you

I found joy

you have affected me

with beauty most alluring

I delight in your presence

that I may continuously feel you..

.

in you

all my sensesΒ awaken

a change most longing

breaking new skin

I took charge

a metamorphosis..

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118 responses to “metamorphosis

  1. Very awesome — I’ve only just figured out how to read your site, as at first I thought the snippets were all there was.

    I love this poem — it really speaks to me!

    • you are welcome ana- perhaps maybe you’d like “scented flowers” and “a tale from the sky”- give me your opinion- i’d love to hear from you..

  2. beautiful…you conveyed the feeling of love so well…i liked the ending…in you all my senses awaken
    a change most longing
    breaking new skin
    I took charge
    a metamorphosis..

  3. A poem that speaks of a higher power in humble gratitude and wisdom coming from giving oneself fully to this life….this is a beautiful treasurechest of poetic sharing…

  4. Love really does change people…you have quite the talent to express your love and adoration so well. I sure hope she saves all these beautiful poems you write to and about her! πŸ˜‰

  5. Beautiful, beautiful poem, Love this sentiment:

    in you

    I found peace

    you have tranquilled

    my innermost sanctum

    P.S. I don’t know who’s bugging you about doing a haiku a day, but it isn’t me. I’m a rhyming gal. πŸ™‚

  6. haha must be sis (someone is special) i got mixed up.. no she didnt bug me- just ask me to join but i cannot.. and rightfully i thought i should let the person know since i was asked and invited to participate..

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