jointed dilemma Posted by fiveloaf on May 20, 2010 every separation weighs heavy jointed dilemma.. . . . Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
This Haiku is deep and ambiguous. I wish I could understand where exactly you are coming from. Well done. Reply
this is so intriguing. It makes me feel like I am standing on a precipice unsure whether I’ll fall or not. Well done! Reply
beautiful lines…you say it best with just a few words… bravo… I need your help to finish a story here YOU ROCK! hugs shakira Reply
pithy. always like to read you. but thought it’s funny that you have more words in your links than in you poem 😉 http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/ Reply
haha- oh really? so i am restrained in writing but rather chatty in comments.. but anyway, tq for coming by.. Reply
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/21/week-19-thursday-poets-rally-the-perfect-poet-award/ week 19 the perfect poet award. enjoy a beautiful weekend. 😉 Reply
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/23/poets-rally-week-19-poetry-awards/ two poetry awards. enjoy! Reply
Having searched through your blog, I can say this is one of the best I’ve seen in a long time. I love your name too, fiveloaf. It rolls from the tongue like silk. Reply
hey thanks and feel free to browse anytime- maybe you’d like “true love waits” or “mood swing” also? Reply
fiveloaf 
a Haiku,
cute,
loved it!
😉
yip- tq ji..
This Haiku is deep and ambiguous. I wish I could understand where exactly you are coming from. Well done.
^o^
this is so intriguing. It makes me feel like I am standing on a precipice unsure whether I’ll fall or not. Well done!
glad it intrigues you.. ^o^
beautiful lines…you say it best with just a few words…
bravo…
I need your help to finish a story here
YOU ROCK!
hugs
shakira
hey thanks!
so very true. so much said in hand counted words.
glad u like it..
so much said in so little words. beautiful.
eh?
a nice haiku ; well done
tq wordwand
pithy. always like to read you. but thought it’s funny that you have more words in your links than in you poem 😉
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
haha- oh really? so i am restrained in writing but rather chatty in comments.. but anyway, tq for coming by..
tight haiku….each decision comes with a consequence, some good, some not so much.
yip brian- u got me!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/21/week-19-thursday-poets-rally-the-perfect-poet-award/
week 19 the perfect poet award.
enjoy a beautiful weekend.
😉
eh? thks!
it is already done jingle-the other day? (wink!)
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/23/poets-rally-week-19-poetry-awards/
two poetry awards.
enjoy!
thanks ji
Having searched through your blog, I can say this is one of the best I’ve seen in a long time.
I love your name too, fiveloaf. It rolls from the tongue like silk.
hey thanks and feel free to browse anytime- maybe you’d like “true love waits” or “mood swing” also?