as I sat there helpless
watching you roughen
these two nights
with whimper
it saddens me
that my umbrella
could not shade
the vulnerability
oozing down your cheeks
.
as I sat there speechless
watching you roughen
these two nights
with whimper
where my umbrella
could not shade
and words could not reach
I held you close to me
to ease your vulnerability
.
and turn whimpers
into loving joy
oozing with promise..
.
.
.
fiveloaf 
Happy ending! Whimpers turning into joy.
Nice read.
thank you words worth- you may perhaps like ‘fragrance from the east’ or ‘a paradox too lovely to forgo’- feel free to browse anytime.. ^o^
Very good…
My dear fiveloaf,
You are such a creative writer so I am TAGGING YOU.. please go to Wordy Wednesday @Tara Miller Writes to write the next 1-3 lines to a story yet told! Once you have done that, please TAG others too. Take care of you! hugs shakira
haha i did that last week- again? lets see- thanks for the suggestion..