it is no longer you and me
but us
an us
that is woven and knotted
an us
but us
happily tied to each other
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it is no longer you and me
but us
an us
that is woven and knotted
an us
but us
happily tied to each other
.
.
.
fiveloaf 
how sweet….
Hope you remain tied up to each other forever…….
tq alethea!
simply gorgeous kris- loved itl
trisha
tq trish..
oh, how sweet the idea of a sweet knot! HBD!
thanks amrita..
Cute and sweet, Fiveloaf! Rope image works well.
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/02/14/valentine-card/
thanks jessica..
Stay together n blessed.. 🙂
Hugs xoxox
thanks olivia..
this is SWEET! 🙂 perfection in so few words!
thank you lil my friend..
very sweet thanks for sharing..
thank you chimnese..
Wow…word magician.
Happy Valentine’s day.
haha hey bro, you are the word juggler..
I feel this in the fiber of my soul!
🙂 and did you? wow! thanks!
Happy Valentines Day and happy times with your loved ones too!!
hope to be nanka.. hope to be..
Happy Valentine’s Day… and yeah, may LOVE tied always.. 🙂
Here are mine for Monday Potluck.. 🙂
http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/02/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpf106-you.html
http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/02/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpf105.html
thanks krislin..
Tied together, not a me and you but us……beautiful statements in few words. Wish you the best!
thanks dan..
Simple and beautiful.
thanks sarsm..
‘Us’ sounds better than you or me. Profound as always. Happy Valentine’s day.
thanks aurora..
Very sweet. Great image.
haha yea..
The simplicity of words often provides the purest sense of meaning.
thank you david..
oh my love… love it! 🙂
thanks bended spoon..
A lovely valentine– have a happy day!
tq mair for coming by..
super sweet,
us is one,
your words are divine…
Happy V Day.
🙂
A++
thanks ji..
so sweet! I like this-it would make a great Valentine!
you do? thank you lola..
awesome
tq robin..
Sounds kinky. : )
it does? haha..
🙂 You tied the knott …?
happy Valentines day!
eh? happy valentines to you too ina..
So very sweet!
Happy Valentines Day!
thanks kelly..
Ohhhh. loving the romance on Valentine’s Day! Thanks for commenting on my potluck poem. HAPPY DAY!
tq julie..
Very nice Valentine’s Day tribute! Love it.
tq aleza..
Beautifully romantic–perfect for Valentine’s Day. I’m so glad you’re happy together.
tq gayle..
Few words that speak volumes. well penned.
Anita
perhaps we should change well penned to well comped..
The bond between two people so poignantly conveyed. A great poem.
thanks david 1
an us says it all…. Happy Valentine’s Day! Wishing you love and joy….
tq heartspell..
Lovely sentiment. There is a lovely song titled weave that this recalls.
Shalom.
and is there? thanks cloaked..
I like the “us” part … always have! 🙂 HVD!
HVD blaga.. HVD to you too!
Enjoyed the macrame, my friend.
haha tq hedgewitch..
Gorgeous and well expressed!
thanks thoughtsnotlost..
This is wonderful. It evokes memories of the love I shared with my late husband. Well done! And thanks for your kind comment on my poem, “Once More.”
Namaste……….cj
no prob cj..
So simple, but so cool!
thanks starka’at
Ahhh…simple but potent in impact. Very nice… 🙂
thanks eugenicist..
Belongingness, bonds and connections that is what makes the love happen and remain forever…
beautiful thought… and I liked the lines..
‘an us
that is woven and knotted’
beautiful… thanks for sharing..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html
thanks shashi..
I like the sweet brevity of this.
thank you irene..
“an us / that is woven and knotted”
Simple, Sweet, and Lovely.
thanks rmp..
short and effective. i liked your repetition of “us” and the line that reads “woven and knotted”. thanks for sharing!! 🙂
tq linn
Glad your experience ‘tying the knot’ is good :o)
thanks mary..
simple and sweet – just like love is 😉
thanks mag..
Hi… Be happy 😉
yea be happy tiger..
haha fiveloaf, yours is too! …just us, but us…so tightly woven, so one at a candle-light dinner…just one in bed!
haha kolembo kolembo haha..
What a sweet, romantic sentiment! Nice and concise!
thanks mattison..
Delightful! Nice romantic one for Valentine’s Day.
Happy Potluck…
thanks jamie my friend..
I love this piece. It depicts the title very nicely, especially the first two lines. A great piece. My favorite- “an us that is woven and knotted…happily tied to each other”. Also liked the way it was written. Bravo!!
thanks tekia..
Aw 🙂 This poem is pure sugar.
thanks hannah..
Very Nice … thank you for pointing me to it. 🙂
That was lovely!
thanks mad kane..
Poignant and simple. Good job. 🙂
thank you fyodor
perfect poem! Lovely! and thanks for visiting my blog! for more go here:
http://kathewsnapaday.blogspot.com
sure will kathe.. thanks!
Those of us that can say this are indeed blessed.
yea- what a flatter liv..
simple, cute and soooooooo romantic 🙂
thank you life..
A fantastic succinct write – it says so much with so few words, each word though strikes out like a paragraph!
thank you ab..
So simple, yet so nice!
thank you seabell..
Heart warming fiveloaf!simple but simply beautiful .
thank you butterflies..
Sweet and simple says it all. Nice job, fiveloaf. Sorry I’m late but hope you had a happy valentine’s day!
~ cheryl
no prob cheryl.. anytime as long as you are free!
Such a lovely Valentines post. Simple and sweet! Well done!
thank you bward42..
Ah, you give me hope. hugs, pat
thanks pat..
Awww… so simple and sweet!! It’s all that “us” .. isn’t it?
Too good, Kris!!
thanks kavi..
simple short cute and so apt! 🙂
thanks dr..
Tied together with a smile ….sometimes a few words can say so much more… lovely 🙂
tq rekha..
Im liking the FIRST TWO comments 😛 😉
beautiful poem :))
thanks harshi haha!
Lovely poem, very visual in the expression of love!
tq lisa my friend..