happily tied

it is no longer you and me

but us

an  us

that is woven and knotted

an  us

but us

happily tied to each other

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131 responses to “happily tied

  1. short and effective. i liked your repetition of “us” and the line that reads “woven and knotted”. thanks for sharing!! 🙂

  2. I love this piece. It depicts the title very nicely, especially the first two lines. A great piece. My favorite- “an us that is woven and knotted…happily tied to each other”. Also liked the way it was written. Bravo!!

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