happily tied

it is no longer you and me

but us

an  us

that is woven and knotted

an  us

but us

happily tied to each other





131 responses to “happily tied

  1. short and effective. i liked your repetition of “us” and the line that reads “woven and knotted”. thanks for sharing!! 🙂

  2. I love this piece. It depicts the title very nicely, especially the first two lines. A great piece. My favorite- “an us that is woven and knotted…happily tied to each other”. Also liked the way it was written. Bravo!!

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