you
thrill me
to the core
of my taste buds
the cheesecake of my dream
a nice creamy recipe
that I crave
so much
you
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you
thrill me
to the core
of my taste buds
the cheesecake of my dream
a nice creamy recipe
that I crave
so much
you
.
.
.
i want cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake… cheesecake…
btw, nice shape of word layout 🙂
haha! wat r u doin?
something i wish to share with you
just look at the syllable..
1
12
123
1234
12345
1234
123
12
1
too tasty. 🙂
oops!
Dear friend,
A little gift (award) for you is waiting eagerly for you at my blog specially decked up for awards- accepting and sharing. Please collect it.
With warmest affections,
http://window2mysoul.wordpress.com/2010/04/25/fiveloafs-honour-roll/
hey thanks trish..
ooohhh, saucy 🙂
haha a little bit i suppose?
succinct , cute and to the point ; well done.
tq wordwand- appreciate your comments..
so are you going to share? smiles.
not this one though haha!
Your words make me melt and spread myself like a pizza topping;-)
oh really?
Hmmmmmm well….. Yeah!
i am humbled.. thanks!
Sweet poem! And a bit savory too!
tq lola haha~
Is it about cheesecake or someone I wonder…?
Nice layout!
I was called ‘strawberry cheesecake’ by friends at school…it’s a long story..
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/03/14/bubble-bath/
write it in your blog and i shall read it haha! thanks jess!
I find this ty[e of poetry so intriguing and then to see th encumbers…awesome. I love the words also.
tq teri..
Excellent style and symmetry!
haha thanks msstevensson
very wondrous and yummy piece.
superb job.
A++
thanks ji..
well, what to say….simply – great, a cheeskake drowned into the beautiful ocean of poetry 🙂
Love it!
thanks eclipse
…I meant cheescake…..
🙂
great spelling for a new recipe..
Ah my heart goes pitter patter to the very name cheesecake – great write though now I have to go out and get me some!
haha ab- cheesecake is infectious and my favourite haha!
I love cheesecake and you leave me craving for it! 🙂
haha bended thanks!
Excellent.. My favourite type cake besides chocolate cake… 😉
Yummy… LOL…
Well, maybe it goes well with my take for this week’s theme? I wrote something about cocktail drink.. 🙂
http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/03/collections-of-tings-poetry-tp117.html
Hope you enjoy my drink.. 🙂
i will krislin and thanks!
Oh there are few tastes in life as delicious as cheescake!
wow and what else louise?
Very charming poem!
thanks madeleine
My favorite tooooo, as a matter of a fact I am now going tow rite a poem about cheesecake too 🙂 will pass the link later on to you! Yummy potluck Kris!
here is my cheesy delight 🙂 http://brokensparkles.wordpress.com/2011/03/14/cheesy-dance/
thanks broken..
Nicely done!
hey thanks mair
Yuummmmmmyyy… and if it’s chocolate cheesecake, it’s a CERTAIN delight for my senses… (drooling already) 😀
haha kavi~ thanks!
Oh, it’s soooo good and evil. : )
you think so thingy?
It tempts me and then I waddle.
Yes, evil. : )
This is way too delicious. Awesome write as always!
thanks dennis..
I love how a lusty relationship can be likened to a decadent dessert! So well done.
tq gayle..
This is what I call a tasty poem! Enjoyed a lot!
tq seabell
Guess this is a half-etheree. It certainly lent itself well to a poem about cheesecake. Fun.
http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2011/03/14/thirteen-ways-of-looking-at-bread-poetry-potluck/
thanks liv..
Wow I loved how you used cheesecake as a metaphor. Your choice of words is superb! 🙂 Very well done.
tq kat..
sweet poem…thanks for the treat..
thanks rashmi..
Nummy. Wonderful conveyance of cake/loved one. I am thrilled with the shape.
thanks cloaked..
Ha! funny you should mention cheese cake!! I just went to the Cheese Cake Factory over the week end Here in Tulsa Oklahoma! It is simply amazing and after my own heart so it is fitting that a love be compared with such awesomeness! Cheers Man!
thanks 2z..
I love this poem. And I love the form you chose for it.
🙂 thanks..
Very cool form! I feel like you just fed me a nice slice of diet cheesecake. Mmmmmmmmm… tastiest zero calories I’ve ever eaten. 🙂
zero calories! i like that caption haha!
ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i’ll die for a pice or give m ethe whole one..i just love cheesecake just the smoothness on my tongue oooh lalala…loved this so much you make it sound some what erotic with the cheesecake what a skill to have fiveloaf…
thanks chim..
Masterful in a few short words. Great tie in with the image of a cheese cake, which now that you mention it, I could really go for. Of course, it’s 2a.m. and I’m fresh out, so I may have to wait, but seriously… great poem. Take it easy,
crb.
thanks duder..
Cute and sensuous at the same time. Now..me want cheesecake too 🙂
haha go ahead and have your fill eugenicist..
Mmmm, love cheesecake. Also love your double entendre–nicely done!
tq ds..
i love cheesecake too… this could be about a person too 🙂
yea robin and thanks!
sweet! 🙂
🙂 haha yea!
nice try!
hope so!
Cheesecake of my dream… I love that!
tq laurie..
You are talking about my great love here. Wow and yum!! Wondering cheesecake here has topping and if so what…just trying to be prescise with my dream.LOL
mine too haha! thanks judy..
I love the format, but I don’t love cheesecake, I’m sorry 🙂
Love it anyways!
you are one in a million and i respect that!
I have never met a cheesecake I didn’t love.
and you are in the million group haha!
Tasty and fun. (And yes, I love cheesecake!) ☼
thanks rj..
I too have a strong love for cheesecake…your poem conveys the overwhelming desire so brilliantly.
thanks david..
Cheescake deserves it’s own Holiday!
yea- into my tummy he travels..
Oh to be loved as much as cheesecake! Great poem, fun! hugs, pat
thanks pat..
Mmmmmmm, I think I have a sugar and dairy problem.
Love that the poem’s a word(count)play piece!
thanks hannah yea!
YUMMMMY! I am a cheesecake fan as well. LOVE the high and compact kind – where the fork stands straight up if left it there long enough … nanosecond before the bite! 🙂 ~ becca
haha becca- thanks!
awww now i feel like having one 😀
that sounds so delicious 😀
thanks raj haha!
I love your style.
are you making a pass on me?
Love is cheesecake for the soul… Beautiful Five…:-)
thanks sam..
This is a very tasty morsel! 🙂 I’ve never seen this specific form, but I like it. Enjoyed!
thanks gloria
appreciate it gloria
Tastefull poem 🙂 You have a way with cheesecake!
Thank you very much for nominating me for the Versatile award!
thanks ina
Gorgeous….simple and complete 🙂
thanks cynthia
Had a suttle sexiness to it, and using cheesecake added to its decedant nature!
tq paulo
Great use of syllables! Now I want cheesecake damn you. 😛
hahhahaha~ james!
What a fun write, pleasing to the eye and tasty, too.
thank you joanna
if it’s a ricotta cheese cake i’m there! lovely. i like how you start and end ‘you’.
thanks rmp
I also nominated you for the Versatile Blogger award. You can pick up the award at the following link : http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/03/15/the-versatile-blogger-award/
With warmest regards,
JP
thanks jp..
I think I’ve gained 10 pound reading food poems. Now you finish it off with a delicious cheesecake. Somebody pry me out of this chair so I can go to bed!. 🙂
Very satisfying read, fiveloaf. Thank you!
thanks kolembo..
hahaha! Ya, and the shape of poem! Nice.
thanks again!
Good food for thought! Here is mine: http://jaanpehchaan.wordpress.com/2011/03/16/it-is-a-strange-world-we-live-in/
thanks jaan
mouthwatering poem!
haha thanks!
Just waiting for someone else to mention that the cheesecake looks like a metaphor for a certain female anatomy part. That also sustains us.
haha thanks whimsy..
very tasty shape and sound.
thanks baishali..
ooooooooooooooooo
someone is really tempted 😛 lol..
such a cute poem 🙂
Decadent and rich in thought. A dessert worth waiting for…
thanks heartspell
thanks harshi..
wonderful mastery of language, well thought words. nice read, feels creamy.
thanks berry.. you reminded me of strawberry shortcake..
That was delicious … and I don’t even like cheesecake. 🙂
you are one in a million madeleine haha but thats ok~ thanks for dropping by..