hugs
kisses
sunshine
affirmation
little things that
usher in the springtide
and bundled us into inseparable lovers..
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hugs
kisses
sunshine
affirmation
little things that
usher in the springtide
and bundled us into inseparable lovers..
.
.
.
fiveloaf 
hi , you are in my blogroll , so I offer you a star award that you deserve , check it out in my blog as well as the rule to accept it.
i will wordwand and thanks..may i add you into my blogroll as well?
cool poem.
i’m optimistic as spring begins to take shape.
tq severny- cheers!
beaUUtifl as always 🙂
always enjoy reading your Haikus.
Bliss ~
thanks sina
oh this is enjoyable.
tq baishali
Lovely 🙂
thanks ina
Love always finds a way – sometimes with the simple hints it puts around us. Love the elegant simplicity in this.
thanks photodiction..
awesomely said fiveloaf, little things are the most favorite things in this world.. here is mine, ~ these are few of my favorite things ~
Someone is Special
thanks someone is special
Springtime for lovers, lovely.
thanks tiger
Splendid!
thanks broken
fun
and brilliant..
A++
haha
You make it seem so easy..and lovely!
haha really?
Nice poem
thanks dunstan
Short, sweet and to the point! Thanks for sharing some of your favorites. 🙂
thanks dragon
🙂 nice!!!
thanks meghna
lovely design,
sweet thought,
well done
yeah!
a hug for you! pat
thanks pat
Ah. spring is beckoning, that little vixen!
vixen? thank honey
yes!
haha tq robin
Aaah the splendid spring:)Your words are filled with sunshine:)Loved it!
thanks raksha
Truly wonderful, fiveloaf..:-)
Well done indeed!
thanks saugraam
Lovely lines.. Guess these are the little things which we cherish invariably and makes a huge difference:)
yes saya and thanks!
wonderful and sweet! 🙂
tq bended..
it sure can 🙂
🙂
Sweet!
Something’s going on with my notifications–I haven’t been getting yours lately and from some others as well… 😦
nothing is wrong gayle.. the ones that appear in fb, i deleted it thru network blog!
I’m not networked into FB…???
Lo-ve-ly!
tq shreedhar
I am looking forward to the morning tomorrow, now after reading this!
😀
thanks amro
lovely write
hey thanks friend!
Lovely tribute to spring and love!
the 1st to nail it laurie..
thats spring all right…
a season for lovers…
tq papo
Nice one. 🙂
tq rekha
Wonderful inspiration for spring.
thanks db
nice optimistic piece… cheers
tq luke
Love the Springtide!!! ❤
thank you kelly
Short, sweet and to the point. Thanks for sharing!
tq dswan2
Little, sweet things, lovely poem:)
thanks krisse
very very nice! 🙂
thanks luna
The structure here is fantastic, as the lines move from the simple little things into their greater importance! Fantastic!
thanks thoughts
Nice ode to spring and to love!
tq lola
hmmm..I love springtime
thanks sheila
Wonderful, Fiveloaf! I haven’t read the other comments, but in case no one has mentioned it yet, “ushers” should be “usher.”
Thanks for dropping by my site and for leaving a comment! I wish you, as always, enough. . .
tq paula
L for Lovers . . . so lovely! Thank you!
thanks kay
Lovely – it builds up a beautiful momentum
thanks marousia
it just makes you feel happy 🙂
you got it paulami
Little things mean a lot…but you don’t want your girlfriend to say that to you !
haha tim!
Very nice!
I enjoyed reading it.
tq sara
I like all that and your poem too!!!
tq seabell for your vote..
It simply stuns how you capture so much in so little – stellar write!
thanks ab
i really like this … spring time brings about such renewal and joy … it makes each of those little things take on a new meaning and outlook!
tq becca
BEAUTIFUL…I like this one!
tq meiro
Wow!!…this is all of the above and then some…awesome Kris
thanks reg
Love the metaphor of love and spring. . .when I hear “tide” I can’t help but be reminded of my favorite muse, the ocean 🙂
Mine: http://pamanner.wordpress.com/2011/04/17/spring/
thanks wordy
Simple, sweet and romantic.!
tq butterflies of time
Short and sweet. Nice write!
tq pandamoniumcat
I like the descending shape of the poem. Marriage vows are one thing but a real partnership descends into embodiment- proven by our responses to the challenges and contents of real world experience.
My wife and I ride the tides of all seasons.
One Love-Tiger
thanks tiger walker
Lovely!
thanks madeleine
Very succinct and neat as always, Fiveloaf.
it’s certainly Spring here in the sunnyn UK!
thanks jessica
Spring feels better with such beautiful words…;-)
thanks sam
The combination of all words just flow like the season of spring… I like this..
thanks krislin
i love how this poem LOOKS as well as reads!
you do? thanks marit..
Very much dug this for the imagery of the moment. Such simple ideas blended into something much more extrinsic to the poem. As always, excellent work. The ease with which you built the image is impressive; leaves quite a mark on the reader! Hope all is well,
crb.
thanks duder everything is fine.. and you got a pretty fine woman with you hehe..
Beautiful words. We could all use a bit of spring right now… either in our weather, our hearts, or both. 🙂
not going to dispute that rhyme..
Delightful 🙂
JP
thanks tasi..
Awesome! I wrote something a lot like this, way back in January, as part of a seasonal series, consisting of Winter, Spring, Summer and Fall…
http://imaginationscandles.blogspot.com/2011/01/summer.html
http://imaginationscandles.blogspot.com/2011/01/spring.html
http://imaginationscandles.blogspot.com/2011/01/winter.html
http://imaginationscandles.blogspot.com/2011/01/fall.html
I love the way you say so much in so few words.
thanks imagination and did you? wow! i ‘d go over in awhile..
I love this sweet poem.
thanks liz..
True indeed.
thanks das..
Love and spring what a wonderful combination! Such a cute poem!
thks april
Love the words and the way they look is so artistic!
thanks teri..
Short and to the point. I like it a lot, fiveloaf.
thanks cheryl
It is the small things that really matter and make the big difference. Nice potluck piece!
you took it out from my mouth again tekia..