we did
they did not
we are real
they are not
we are certain
they are not
let us forget them
before
we lose sight
of ourselves..
.
.
.
we did
they did not
we are real
they are not
we are certain
they are not
let us forget them
before
we lose sight
of ourselves..
.
.
.
thanks for the poem, your visit ( to my blog ) and youe comment and your invitation as well.
a lovely poem up there.I love the rhyming and the juxtaposed phrases.
you’re welcome..
nicely done
what you say
and what you do not
leaves us wondering
and relating
to our own stories
tq ray..
hi friend, william here from jingles rally, excellent poem friend, loved the imagery, well constructed, bravo..my poem is up 🙂
tq william- sure, i shall view yours..
heh, i just edited the one you commented a few minutes ago, i decided to put the Very real thing… maybe you wanna check again, lol… 🙂
ok- i shall view it- thks for notifying me..
wow…that was crisp and nice..
err… who are the THEY here??
stumbled to ur blog thanks to Jingle 🙂
you could check out my Thursday Rally poem too..
http://megzone.wordpress.com
very sharp observation- people who wanted to see us break?
Hi! Here from Jingle’s Poet Rally. This poem gives out a beautiful message..sometimes in comparing ourselves to others, we loose sight of ourselves.
Each individual is unique in themselves.
Thanks for sharing this.
it brings me contentment that my poem could make you think- thanks for dropping by datsme!
creative,
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/02/18/the-spot-light-award-and-more/
get your new award in my place.
😉
another one? holy moses… haha thks!
this could represent anything.
something that to me is not easy.
cool poem
tq buddy— cheers!