scene 1 take 1:
willingly
she showed him how
to grind the ink stone
redefining its consistency
.
scene 2 take 1:
firmly but gently
she held his hand
guiding his brush stroke
applying grace with pressure
.
scene 3 take 1:
affirmatively
she helped him retell their story
no blots, no stains
all perfectly balanced
.
.
.
a splendid calligraphy
meaningful
reassuring
timeless..
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CUT!
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wow. i never cease to amazed by your poetry. 🙂
tq for the compliment glit!
omigosh, just reread this. even more amazing than i remember! 🙂 xx
thanks glit..
beautiful..
thks nano..
hello,
nice to get to know u,
I appreciate your support,
😉
no trouble at all- i’d lookout for your 6th thursday rally when it comes..
Noooooo you cut it too soon! I wanted to read more! 🙂
haha thanks dragon- thats funny!
excellent
thanks dthaase
you are a true artist!
this work speaks of true art 🙂
LOVELY and
AMAZING
tq sina
What a wonderful way to connect poetry and art! You could easily include the music theme of your movie!
tq seabell..
very uniquely treated! Loved the whole effect- cut.. 🙂
a very fine piece!
Hugs xox
thanks olivia
You keep on amazing me Five…:-)
tq sam
Poet and story writer!
no story teller booguloo haha! sorry to dissapoint you!
Cool– both the idea and the verse!
thanks mair..
i can feel the scene… nice creativity
tq robin..
so lovely! when will you not write a masterpiece? 🙂
as long as someone like bended stop praising my writing haha..
aah! poetic calligraphy! unique one. fiveloaf.
thanks butterflies of time..
This was beautiful I could see it play scene by scene.
tq chim
Art and poetry and love are intertwined beautifully.
Iris
tq iris
What a clever and unique way to write a poem!
I applause your originality. Bravo! Encore, encore!
tq kiera
whoa, this is divine.
thanks honey
Your poems always amaze me:)
and did i raksha? thanks..
Great!
thanks mr watson
Awesome! Short but absolutely perfect 🙂 I bow to thee my friend…
you don’t bow to a novice lol…. thanks eugenicist!
I’m never disappointed when I visit here. Another highly creative piece.
thanks mc gee..
Amazing — like the setup and direction. That’s a wrap!
thanks becca..
Nice architecture to this piece. Much enjoyed ~ Rose
thanks c rose
I wished this to go on and on …
lovely 🙂
thanks lady
Lovely and subtle, I love it
thanks krisse
you always amaze me with your poetry … brilliant one
thanks raj..
Why did it get the “cut!” I wanted to read more.
haha thanks lola
A great reading u wrote, Hope you will continue it.
tq kodjo
Your poetry is always so unique and interesting!
tq teri
I like the way you attempted to weave in poetry within a drama. Especially how you put up calligraphy as the main theme, bringing a final touch to the word painting! Looking forward to more inspirational pieces from you:)
you have a very keen mind clariice~ thanks!
ouch! was cut as it it stopped being timeless or you cut the scene? I was enjoying it and then ouch!!! you yelled cut 😛 lol
Nice play on words my dear 🙂
thanks life.. cut the scene yea?
unique…I like! hugs, pat
tq pat..
Beautiful poetic play! Very fun format. 🙂
tq rhyme
This is wonderful. Very well done!
no thanks to me haha
Very succinct – and a wonderful story of how love guides the other. True love in some ways, really is the telling of the story in the other’s voice, isn’t it?
love your opinion photodiction..
Absolutely fresh and unique. Enjoyed the idea.
thanks dheep
What could I say Five?
Beautiful as always.
Hugs
thanks meiro
Amazing love story! The end caught me off guard. Great poetry as always! 🙂
thanks sonam
Lovely poem, wonderful tale.
thanks mbk
I was hoping you were to continue with this one, an ode of sorts to the event…it was gracefully fluent and quite nice actually, I thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks.
thanks john
I love it! 😀 A beautiful love story told in a unique way. I love your use of calligraphy to illustrate their love story – the art helped them establish a deep connection 🙂 Well done
thanks kat
beautiful…
A++
super late, sorry.
no worries..
This is deep…nice one!
Bless!
thanks emmanuel
Very good! 🙂
tq ina..
Creative telling of a story written in love…nicely done.
thanks das
Who wouldn’t want to write such brush strokes as that? 🙂
thanks jinksy
Clever thought….A poetic scene
tq uma..
Very elegant and poetically transparent in the best way..A beautiful entry, fiveloaf 🙂
thanks yelena
Fabulous piece… stunning imagery!
tq reflections