I tumbled into the pit
only to discover
fervents of spring
burrowed in your wishes..
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I tumbled into the pit
only to discover
fervents of spring
burrowed in your wishes..
.
.
.
fiveloaf 
^_^
thanks poppy- smile!
Delightful and it makes me smile as well, fiveloaf. 😉
tq suzanne!
a gentle love…
well done.
Thanks for sharing.
thank you ji..
Thanks for sharing! Happy Potluck!
you are welcome scent of my heart..
My name is Blaga, how about yours fiveloaf? Thanks for returning the visit!
my name is kris- nice to meet you.. and tq for dropping by,,
Beautifully romantic and easily interpreted within the readers experience. Thank you fiveloaf.
thank you suzanne..
This is so sweet & romantic ^_^
it is! it is imagina! thank you..
Tumbling into something even more than anticipated – lovely!
thanks talon..
intense language– like flavors! nice write.
thank you mair..
WOW. I am always amazed when I see a short poem that is successful. You say so much in these few lines. Kudos!
thank you RAE for your inspiring comments.. 🙂
You say so much in so few words. Wonderfully done.
thank you thoughtnotlost again..
Crisp, as in I can hear the rustling of the dry leaves now, nice, very well done.. Can bring an instant smile.. ! Thanks for sharing,
Rachana.
tq heart..
This is excellent! So glad you shared it.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/24/missouri-1907/
thanks teresa..
Touched my heart…so beautiful, soft and
gentle. Great write my friend xxx
thank you buttercup!
Nice…I tumbled into your blog and am happy to read this… 🙂
haha tq sumit 🙂
a secret message in this perhaps. Made me smile! 🙂
tq eaton..
A great write – far more filling that one would originally assume before they taste each small morsel of words
morsel? haha- nice way to put it! thanks a.b.!