This is really sweet. My husband would be thrilled if I wrote him something like this. I love the last line. Hearts are so often compared to birds, even birds in a cage. Thanks for leading me here.
I picture a butterfly hovering near a beautiful flower waiting to taste the sweet nectar… Would that be an accurate image? Anyway, the words are truly the sweetest…. )( flutter on… ๐ Heartspell
This is really sweet. My husband would be thrilled if I wrote him something like this. I love the last line. Hearts are so often compared to birds, even birds in a cage. Thanks for leading me here.
patience and kindness go hand in hand with waiting when love is concerned. This is lovely
thk you for taking an interest.. welcome anytime!
oh so short and sharp, yet effective uses of words.. this is lovely, i tend to write long ๐
thanks imagina..
let it fly,
way up high…
beautiful love poem.
tq ji..
hmmm… can’t decide of this is love or infidelity– interesting paradox.
this is love mair, love! haha!
short and sweet! Love defines all =P
thanks rikka..
you write some of the sweetest poems. like the image of the last line. bravo!
tq tekia
Are true love and hubby the same person, I wonder…….Hmmm
Or is it just me?
Loved it!
tq jessica
This poem can be read two different ways. I like both.
tq dan..
So sweet and dear. I loved it.
tq thoughtsnotlost..
I picture a butterfly hovering near a beautiful flower waiting to taste the sweet nectar… Would that be an accurate image? Anyway, the words are truly the sweetest…. )( flutter on… ๐ Heartspell
did I offend?
oops i miss a reply i think or was this the one which went to spam? haha! no! you did not offend- ๐
I hope the true love and the husband are the same. Such a mysterious poem.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/24/missouri-1907/
yes they are the same- if not it is a scandal haha!
Love…how wonderful
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/08/28/do-you-dream-of-me/
thank you JP..
Love doesn’t need a lot of words to be expressed and understood. ๐
tq eaton for yor lovely comments
Love this! Short, sweet and adorable!
thanks christine..
Nice one fiveloaf.
Pamela
thank you pamela..
good one. ๐
thanks trish..
true love waits.
soulmate awaits.. ๐ ๐
Loved this one.. so few words and just a small truth.
~Punam
thank you punam..
Very interesting My Dear!! xx
thank you olivia..