today,
a butterfly came into my garden.
as she dances in unison to the arty balinese theme,
i watched her flutter-
her sweet nonchalance
permeates the air..
through shimmering light,
her beauty was eternal.
an aphrodite of everyones dream.
as she captivates my gaze,
then resting on my finger,
a camaraderie entered.
inside my envelope,
i too fluttered.
i became a butterfly she is!
what seems momentary
became a gamut of embrace,
of kisses,
of one.
what seems impossible
was en routed
because today,
in fantabulous effervescence,
a butterfly
came into my garden..
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.
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It is so wonderful that you noticed and enjoyed the butterfly. Not everyone does. Of course, you are a true poet, so it is natural that you would see all the beauty that rests in the winged one.
Love this poem, fiveloaf.
Peace and Joy,
Suzanne
^o^
ah butterflies, i loved them so much, thank for stopping by just now and it is great reading your works=D beautiful words that touches my heart^^
no prob riika..
You not only watched the butterfly, you became the butterfly. Then you reated the experience in eloquent fashion to those who cared to read it. And yu did so quite well! Very nice!
yea haha! tq charles for being observant enough..
Sweet … very nice …!!!
Isadora
hey tq isadora!
sweet.. and nice use of metaphor…butterfly in the garden ~
thanks heaven..
This is beautiful! A really unique take on the prompt! Thanks!
tq donna!
How beautifully you became One with the butterfly. We can, you know, be One with all. I first experienced this as a little girl when I went inside a dragonfly. Of course, the grownup dismissed the whole thing and I felt ashamed, as if I had lied. We have so much beauty around us and how often we fail to notice. Good for you that you not only noticed it, became One with it, but then wrote this lovely poem so we could share it with you. a big hug for you! pat
thank you pat! i accept your hug haha!
Her sweet nonchalance permeates the air………..Just being beautiful and sweet is enough. Glad her graceful fluttering caught your attention.
tq dan- still remember your funny poem hahaha!
You know they say if a couple stays together long enough they start to favor one another right? – Sorry couldn’t resist.
“what seems momentary
became a gamut of embrace,
of kisses,
of one.”
Ah, the joining of hearts and becoming one. Beautifully told Fiveloaf.
tq raivenne..
Butterflies are my favorite! Loved the words used in this piece! Bravo! Here one i wrote: http://tekia.wordpress.com/2011/04/17/bye-bye-butterfly/
tq tekia- will be there!
Another delightful flight of fancy! Well done. Peace :):)
haha yea, fancy! tq terri for coming by..
her sweet nonchalance……I so yearn for that! Thank you so much for including your link with your comment, I enjoyed your entry very much!
tq sherrie..
Yes. About this time of year giant butterflies come here to die from Africa. I found it very upsetting at first. Now if I see one I bless it.
wow ok tiger.. mark it with the sign of the cross.. 🙂
I loved your poem, I too love to watch butterflies. Way back I wrote a poem about one.
Thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a lovely comment.
Yvonne.
tq yvonne..
I was right there with you, imagining being a butterfly – thank you for sharing!
tq wyoming..
Nice one.
hey thanks booguloo..
Fantastic – I loved the metaphoric tone of the write!
hey tq a b my friend- its been a long time!
you become one so that two can dance and kiss,
what a bliss.
enjoyed your story style piece.
🙂
tq morning..
feels like a kiss to me. beautiful!
thank you for your visit and comment 🙂
tq hope..
ummm just great!! 🙂
haha thanks elyas..
tq sarah, tigerbrite, pat, elyas, isadora, sophia, boogulooo and terri for liking.. 🙂
To be one with nature and life like that, in a poem, in a thought, and still be distant from it somehow I think that is great 🙂 (Not sure I make sense here lol)
hahah yea you made sense ina.. thanks!
The winged one, one so colorful.Your going into one is actually being able to savor the myriads of beauty that nature offers. Appreciating it from a butterfly’s eyes certainly opened up countless of options in life. Beautifully done!
thanks kaykuala..
wow! such a beautiful connection — wonder full, wonderful! 🙂
tq bended..
ooooh! i love this! a really gorgeous feeling to it! ♥
tq dani for liking and commenting..
Butterflies are enchanting, appealing so does your poem! Love the new blog theme 🙂
thank you blaga..
Thrilling read. I enjoyed it. 🙂
thanks bro– i like yours haha!
Nice use of a metaphor. Glad you included your link with your comment. This was a treat!
tq california ink for liking and your comment..
cheerful and nice
liked it
tq lioness..
IF I AM NOT MISTAKEN THE BUTTERFLY YOU ADDRESSED HERE THE LADY LOVE OF YOUR POEM…IF THIS IT THEN AMAZINGLY YOU PICTUREISED HER ENTRY SO BEAUTIFULLY…AND I GUESS A WOMEN IS A BUTTERFLY WITH WINGS OF COLOURS THROUGH WHICH SHE PAINTS A MAN’S LIFE.
AMAZING POETRY:)
AND THANKS FOR VISITING MY BLOG 🙂
MY LATESTEST ENTRY IS
http://blindfold-princess.blogspot.com/2011/08/awaiting.html?spref=bl
tq life for your comment..
That ‘s a very excellent poetry …Thanks for share…
tq pure2core..
Nicely done, I like it alot!
tq ghosterb..
Lovely read and image. Reminds me of a time when I had my back and front windows open and a butterfly flew into my apartment from one side, flitted around a bit, and then flew out the other window. I felt like I had been touched by the universe!
tq blitzken..
Interestingly Written, Loved the words you used. Well Done, this I did enjoy. ^^
tq ankoku..
I’m glad that butterfly came into your garden 🙂 Nice write
tq pervagus..
“an aphrodite of everyones dream.” –> What a nice way of describing the butterfly’s beauty! 🙂 I enjoyed reading your poem – a beautiful way of appreciating nature’s simple beauties. 🙂
tq katherine..
tq dandelion28 for liking..
How are you today?
Happy end of November!
Appreciated your support to our poetry picnic,
Hope to see you share today,
A random poem or old poem will do the wonders too.
Your talent rocks.
Hope to see you in.
xoxox
thx jingle..